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AGE: 16
LOC: Cooperstown, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 29

Hey! My name is Amy.
I am fifteen.
Writing is my passion.
I have completed one 200+ page novel.
I am working on the sequel.
I am random and spontaneous.
I love meeting new people! :)
I have way too many story starters saved on my computer that I just can’t seem to let go of…

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Tanith's Destiny
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Tanith’s Destiny Chapter 1 The Warlord’s castle, Geniang, in the country of Abdesta. Smack! Crack! Smack! The thwack of wood on wood echoed about the warm room. ‘Ouch!’ A girl threw down her staff and sat, sucking on her sore fingers. ‘Pay attention girl! Up, up! Get up!’ A small, slender girl of eight scowled at the tall, wiry man who glared back at her. She finally stood up and began to circle him again. Tall glass windows let the rays cast by the late ...
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Young Adult / Gaelwyn
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Gaelwyn watched her mother riding up ahead, the afternoon light playing on her dark hair, glancing off the jeweled coronet that hung heavy on her fair brow, and making golden patches in the hollows of her dark cloak. Gaelwyn thought that surely, her mother was the most beautiful woman in the world. Queen Sabraxa’s pale skin was hidden under the cloak; only her face, heavily coated in the lotions and potions that kept her translucent skin from burning, showed. Even so, Gaelwyn could tell her m...
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Poetry / Heart of Stone
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Close your heart away in a little black box, Fasten all the little locks, Give into a quiet, overwhelming despair Sink into a world where you don't have to care. Let yourself drown in tears, You know the heartache won't ease throughout the years, Try to float away from here, Try to release the memories you held so dear. Grow the briars high around your enchanted castle That no hero could ever tackle, And while you dream your thousand year sleep away Just let your sadness end today. Watch you...
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Poetry / Choice
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I thought it was done, I believed it was over, But how naïve I was To think this could be over. I thought peace had been made and I wouldn’t be tugged two ways again, I wouldn’t have to decide between two friends again. How silly I was to think that, To believe I could just be happy for once, Not to have my life complicated, To not be in pain or tears for once. This war never ended, It’s still going on, And I thought it could end, But it turns out I didn’t have any idea what was going on. Cau...
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5 Things You Should Know About Me 1) My family is crazy. 2) I am addicted to the computer. 3) I’m crazy weird. 4) I often have huge, unrequited crushes on people. 5) I hate pain. 4 Facts About Me 1) My name is Stella-Marie Ashford. 2) I’m fifteen. 3) I have three siblings—two sisters and a brother. 4) My birthday is July 4th, 1992. 3 Things That Make Me Unique (at least to me!) 1) I have six best friends. 2) I’ve never gone out with anyone—or been asked out for that matter. 3) I read really f...
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This poem is good, but cryptic (as it was probably intended to be). Lots of good adjectives, but it does get a little repetitive after awhile. Great lines though: my favorite was: Reached each non-negotiable marker on time. Nicely done.
Poetry / Perfection
This is a very good poem; it is about Cassandra of Troy correct? You capture her very well in this poem--good imagery and similes. However, while describing her clothes is very nice, maybe consider adding a little more about her personality? Just a suggestion, but on the whole, very nice.
Poetry / The Prize
This is AMAZING. I loved your imagery and your analogies. Beautifully done!
Your thoughts are good, but no offense, the rhyming's a little tacky and some parts don't make sense. -Does it what it thrive ..???? -Can every man love? as a kid shove?...again..??? I like your thoughts, and I think you have some real talent. Just work on your presentation (ie: analogies, rhyming etc., so it doesn't sound tacky). Believe it or not, you CAN over do analogies (as many of my friends tell ME)...so just be careful with that.
Poetry / Immersion
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