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AGE: 30
LOC: Trenton, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 11

IM HERE TO READ… THIS IS THE BEST SITE EVER… THANK YOU TO ALL THAT SHARE THERE WORK.. I WISH I HAD THE ABILITY TO WRITE ONE SENTENCE LET ALONE A SHORT STORY OR ANYTHING ELSE

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These are the same people I have hung out with on many occasions. The evening no different than any other. Carie, her husband Kyle, Erin, her boyfriend, Mike and myself. Me, the only non-couple at these gatherings. Dinner, drinks, smokes and the card game. The card game appears to be as any other poker night with any normal group of people. When the drinks increase so the do the wagers. First, innocently enough, a bet of clothing. That kinda surprised me the very first time, but soon it beca...

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by obamafu

that makes me smile... i am not real concerned about the garden itself.. but the am amused at how much news time it recieves.. organic bull shit .. great

by missf410

Locked

by martykate

Writen well.. enjoyable. I was interested in the very beginning .. I wouldnt announce the date change... would give clues to it in the first couple sentences... over all great

by medicman65

I'm not not an expert in grammer, but I did notice errors. Other than that, i very much enjoyed the story. I would love to know how many paramedics and other public safety officers feel this way, or have actually taken part! Revise the piece so it reads smoother. enjoyed

by sfritsch

Mid life crisis at 36.. or maybe divorce?

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