This is the truest statement. On either end, writing or reading. You put into words what I get from reading. Good job.

to drown in that couris tide seems to actually intrigue me !

thus far i have found Nick and Edward to be quite developed. You took me right to the edge of the river with your descriptions and already feel sadness for Mr. Stuart, having to have seen his friend's death. Im excited about the second part.

Very enjoyable little read .. i will be back to read more !

You threw a lifeline, fought with all you (YOUR)? might. definatley fits to an eerie tune.. by a camp fire! wish i could hear as well.. i think that would envoke more emotion.

Mid life crisis at 36.. or maybe divorce?

I'm not not an expert in grammer, but I did notice errors. Other than that, i very much enjoyed the story. I would love to know how many paramedics and other public safety officers feel this way, or have actually taken part! Revise the piece so it reads smoother. enjoyed

Writen well.. enjoyable. I was interested in the very beginning .. I wouldnt announce the date change... would give clues to it in the first couple sentences... over all great

that makes me smile... i am not real concerned about the garden itself.. but the am amused at how much news time it recieves.. organic bull shit .. great