I must say that this is poem is something I can see being published in a book. It is like a story running in my mind all the way through. I liked it very much. I was turned on then turned off at the same time. I liked the way it moved around the monster title, good change! I would like to read more from you.

Does the age have to be sixteen or is it really just the younger generation? I liked this piece it was fun to read.

I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written with the transition between buildings and an actual being. I hope to read more from you!

I enjoyed reading this very much. It reminds me of the relationship I am in now. I wish you would have gone into depth a little more about why you needed help at the end. Otherwise the poem overall was a very good read.

This is one of those short stories you think will turn out to be a sad one then it twists and turns into a happy ending (Sorta considering the circumstance). Very good detail. I really liked the way you opened up with the telephone conversation. It lead the story straight through to the end with the plot. I enjoyed this piece, very cute, and surprising. Keep it up!

I think I have fallen in love with this poem. I can remember mornings like this, feeling the awkwardness and the excitement. I didnt find anything wrong with the form or grammar. It was clear and flowed straight through to the end. I enjoyed it a lot, it will be in my favorites list. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with the public.

I would have to say this is the most entertaining piece I have read in a long while. I would suggest that maybe some more description of the lady Crew killed would be good, like adding facial expressions. Otherwise, great piece cannot wait for the next chapter.

Simple and yet very meaningful. I like this very much. Good job!

I enjoyed this piece. It was a good story about the sanctity of a woman who was in a no woman zone. This story gives me inspiration to work for something even though all the odds are against me.