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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 13
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 13
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A prized color, worth and value almost exceeds my own brother and would you bother to see what I've expressed, as I blindly caressed the cold cement wall, watch out not to fall towards an abandoned train littered with a generations movement cuased by the need for change I've never exchanged a smile for pain and still nuthin remains the same, its got an edge and a sniff of danger the rush, the adrenaline, running through my veins, a heart pounding out of my chest, the throbbing in my ever list...
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where Im from Im from faded jeans and red caps hoods and savage kicks from banana seats and dirt roads, just before eight hours of stars I am from pine trees holding memory of a fall we cant forget that sticky sap stays put I am from hard work and playin even harder the way we used to at the lake Im from the hurry-ups and the lets-take-it-easies from harsh truth that always ends with soft spoken words Im from total awareness of fake and reality from burning black top and the never-let-the-b...
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seems like your being really down on urself anyways its a good job and i like how you write it
it allows me to feel for the woman and relate to her on the same level its really well written
this is really interesting to me and well written the only question i have for you is what is the deep meaning it sarts out simple then quickly becomes more and more complicated with stronger word use. is there a theme?
its a great plot and a good set up for an amazing story but i felt no deep connection to the character i wanna exactly how she felt and describe how she drug the bodies were they heavy was it gross? give me more to see and hear and feel but really its really good i couldnt of thought of something like that
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