Good rhythm. I like.

Reminds me of relationships I had in the past. Well written and you can actually feel the roller coaster of an abusive relationship. A little proofreading and some improvements and I think this would be a great success!

Beautiful and real. I like how this poem flows and ebbs.

One word for you: RIGHTEOUS. Rock on my friend.

hahaha, i love this poem! after my own futile attempts at writing at writing about intoxication, it is good to know someone successfully came through with a masterpiece.

I love it. Quite a profound perspective to our lives. The poem flowed very well and it all came together in a cohesive manner. Bravo.

Well written. Great cyclical nature. Would be a great present for mother's day.