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AGE: 21
LOC: Valencia, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 23

Seeking the abnormal form of the context of society, I enjoy the concepts of duality with respect to humanity, not people (if you understand what I mean).

...I’d love to find my satellite.

Advise deemed suitable:
     “Talk to as many strangers as you can, knowing full well you can assault them if the evidence is in your favor.”
     “Anarchy is good for you when you’re ready to give up all your ‘civil rights’ in a psychologically chaotic civilization.”
     “Theft is getting what you want when you need it, piracy is getting what you want when you don’t need it.”
     “Only the boogeyman can tell you where we go when we’re in hell, but his office moves from place to place daily.”
     “You have the right to legal counsel o…

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Ash Wednesday
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It started off as a usual day at school, getting bullied and what not, but no one was really expecting such a horrible catastrophe to unfold upon the world. The virus was man made, that much everyone knew, but as to how it got free, not to mention the fact that it spread as quickly as it did, no one was sure on. There was plenty of speculation and hypotheses, but no solid conclusion except that this was the day humanity realized the word apocolypse. The first million infected instantly died,...
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10 Reviews   6 Comments
Every second of time produces a chance for misfortune.
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Quotes / Irony
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18 Reviews   3 Comments
You can't spell pacifist without fist.
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Poetry / Glamourized
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Skin so soft and clean, Washed in silk and made pristine, You glamorized child of the star, Driving nice and fancy car, Call friends on cellular telephone, Carefree, careless, know not what you own, Blinding spot of touched red goop, Dazzle men with turn of loop, Catch her glimpse of television, Eye of beholder under no provision, Let her go, she had much fun, Glamorized child now burns in sun, Death brings hope, as much it does sadness, Is ignorant bliss worth fragile tenderness?
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Poetry / Politicks
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Watching the news, paving the way for new views, father watches who will win, doesn’t matter since they’ll all sin; “Yes” to this, “No” to that, it’s all the same, that’s the fact. Will we even find truth? Or is that, itself, a flaw? An illusion built into a booth, helps wire up your jaw
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Quotes / Whom Understands
The piece itslef has a deep base, but its structure is flawed: "whose" is relating to a question more than it is signifying to a particular individual. Unless you are refering to life being "whose understandings" upon which we may gain a better understanding of ourselves, or such, it leaves the quote confusing. But I enjoy the word order, allowing a Confucious style of thinking.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme from subtle alliteration to an aabb style. Your syntax, too, delivers a sequencing of events where the speaker endures the hardships of begging "to understand" why this partner is an "idealistic abuser" to the insurmountable result of refusing "to believe." Turmoil is the yearning goal of such destructable "fears."
7/8/7/2 In the beginning of the fifth paragraph, it should be comedic, rather than "comic." At the end of the paragraph, you would emphasize the irnoy if you said "mere normality" rather than "merely a normality." I must say, it is alright so far, but not as good as it could be. You are too descriptive with your work. It doesn't give me a chance to project my own image - like reading a movie. You are creating all the aspects and you say certain lines that are unnecessary/ damaging. For instan...
Lyrics / Wings of a Dove
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