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LOC: Sachse, TX
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LAST LOGIN: September 16
LOC: Sachse, TX
GEN: Male
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Postscript: before you run your enemy through, make sure of who is your enemy. and all at once he awoke with a jerking start. awoke from a dream. brought back to life, although he couldn't quite recall the details. he did remember that in it he had had a feeling that could only be described as nervous excitement. if this was for good or ill was to soon be determined. unfortunately he had more pressing matters to attend at the moment. he had awoken in a pool of blood. realizing his entire body...
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Underwater stars seems like a childishly foolish idea. Her underwater stars are inch beyond my reach should be either "Her underwater stars are [an] inch beyond my reach or "her underwater stars are inches beyond my reach". She tastes like grandma's biscuits is really awkward and uncomfortable imager. She says: "Just close your eyes; feel free to breathe me in". is also very chiche'd and detached. Like morning coffee Mondays - is a waste of a line. Either merge it with the next or delete it i...
Well I'm all for a story of vampires, but to be honest I found this story lacking. I know its just a glimpse of a larger story, but the connections felt superficial even still. *And then there She was. His Lady. His Goddess. He fell to his knees before her, weeping, begging. She gave him hardly a second glance, instead pulling Her from her hiding place. His Love.* I had no idea there were two women here until I read it again a couple of times. Its hard when both pronouns for both females are ...
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