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Bodies drawing closer together Arms outstretched wide Feeling the warmth and security Being wrapped tightly inside All alone in this moment in time Breathing softly in And feeling this person inside Soft tears well up Trying desperately to hide Revealing only a smile Though a part of you dies Copyright 2006 "Once Around the Block"
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This was a very nice story though it seemed to lack some realism. I didn't feel like I was a part of this story. I did enjoy it very much. Try working on the descriptive paragraphs a little more.
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