throughxthexfire's profile
AGE:
15
LOC: Holland, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 04
LOC: Holland, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 04
Hello :]
I’m fifteen. And I love writing and music most. Reading and photography take second place though. Although photography is lower than writing on my priority list, I couldn’t live without it.
I love thunderstorms, and rain. Depression inspires me and I write my best late in the night.
In person, what I say sometimes confuses people and leaves them with more questions than answers. I’m very cryptic and I keep most things to myself. A person will hardly ever get a full (and true) story from me. I feel too vulnerable when everything is out.
But anyways, thanks for looking at my page and reading whatever you read.. if you read anything.
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I’m generally nice, but I’m terrible at reviewing, so I’m sorry if I give a bad review!
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Drowning is better than this... it has to be. I stare at my disgusting face in the mirror. No wonder people don't like you, you pathetic little whore, I scold myself silently. The hideosity of the face that looks back at me in the glass is insulting. Every person I attach myself onto runs away. I can see why they do. If people hate me so much maybe things will just be better without me. Yes, things would be better without me. Flirting with the idea that pops into my head, I turn on the faucet...
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Version 1
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Stained from the blood of another wound, A thorn from another rose Pricks my skin so fragile The millionth time torn to pieces Maybe sometime I'll break Finish your job, I'm not supposed to still be alive. Isn't it always that way? An almost finished puzzle Destroyed in the making. Go tell the world you almost killed me, But you spared me, And left me to die alone.
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Drowning is better than this... it has to be. I stare at my disgusting face in the mirror. No wonder people don't like you, you pathetic little whore, I think to myself. The hideosity of the head that looks back at me in the glass is insulting. Every person I attach myself onto runs away. I can see why they do. If people hate me so much maybe things will just be better without me. Yes, things would be better without me. Flirting with the idea that pops into my head, I turn on the faucet. Wat...
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Version 1
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Drowning is better than this... it has to be. I lower my face down dramatically, adding more to this morbid mood. The tip of my nose hits the water lightly, shivers run through my body. My eyes wide open, I stare at the water that I keep approaching. I have no interest to stop. What happens to me is for the fates to decide. I've lived through Hell, where do I go next? Halting airflow to my lungs, I submerge my head in the water. My long hair disseminates around my head. The water burns my sen...
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Version 1
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I've been in this place before, And every minute more I'm dying, If you believe I'll make it through, To yourself you're only lying. I've felt this burn before, And the fire never seems to dull, If I want to eliminate the pain, I'll just find the trigger and pull. I've never hurt this bad before, Inside I'm no longer alive, I cannot seem to find the shore, So I prepare to dive. I've never drowned before, I've just had some trouble breathing, You took away my air, my life,...
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"For envious streaks of time, and space Do not withdraw with grace" i don't like how close space and grace are. the rest of the poem, the rhyming words are further apart, and i like that better. Apart from small things like that, I liked the poem. It flowed pretty nicely, but as with every thing, could be better. But for what it is, I think it's really good. :]
I really like this, specifically the bridge. The only thing I can see that I don't really like is "Cause that is the only norm" I get what it's saying, but my brain kind of tripped when I read it. Other than that, I really liked it. :]
I like the poem, but the rhyme scheme is a little plain to me. I think that everything else is really good though. For some reason "I'm lost, if not forlorn" really appeals to me. I love it. I don't know that i like the way it opens, it kind of reminds me of one of those infomercials for some reason. But that might just be me...anyway, I like the theory and concept of it. Instead of taking a totally logical look at time travel, it kind of compares two different dimensions that this person is ...
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