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AGE: 21
LOC: Saint Marys, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23

Hello everyone and thanks for viewing my profile. My passion is fiction writing but I am also quite capable of doing essays and technical writing. My poetry is more of a past time then anything serious. I really hope to get published soon or at least land some kind of professional writing work. Anyway all critique is greatly appreciated and hopefully I can make a few friends while improving my writing skills.

Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law. – Aleister Crowley

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Poison kisses and soul draining cuddles Dollar signs glint  in her dark eyes An unspoken pay per play policy    Cocaine powders her nose Crown Royal quinches her thirst No strings attached encounters tame her lust   Loyalty is but a word for her lips to lie Conversation as dry as the martini she holds Pleasures of the body and green scraps of paper consume her   When those three words pass her lips Your heart lights up and flutters Her tainted soul twists in agony and...
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Poison kisses and soul draining cuddles Dollar signs glint  in her dark eyes An unspoken pay per play policy    Cocaine powders her nose Crown Royal quinches her thirst Casual sex sustains her lust   Loyalty is but a word for her lips to lie Conversation as dry as the martini she holds Pleasures of the body and green scraps of paper concern her   When those three words pass her lips Your heart lights up and flutters Her dark soul twists in agony and joy   Anothe...
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Teardrops Oh so shattered dreams Their sorrow carries into the dark night Soil tainted and stained with a salty dark crimson liquid A fleeting sense of reality as a glint of moonlight shines off a sliver of silver Upon each thrust emotions overflow and the spray soaks them both like rain Gasping air and catching breath their tear filled eyes connect It was her first moment of clarity and his last His eyes became dull and glazed Her eye passion filled What is lost Sanity Suicide Now that love...
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Poetry / Dark's Embrace
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It feels like I can't see the next day Until I see this one through Staring off into the darkness late in the morning Sleep tugging on my eyelids Fighting every single yawn In these hours my nightmares visit me While I am still awake, not bothering to wait For my tired eyes to close Morning comes and the Sun breaks darkness I can't bear to watch Slumber until late in the day Hiding from reality Afternoons I wake Annoyed to see the daylight creeping Through blankets tied up against windows I h...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Soul of the World
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Act One: Journey of a Soul Ancient live oaks surround me in this safe haven from all of society. I do not consider myself to be hiding from the world, just withdrawn from it. These beautiful plants appear to stir my emotions as if they were a cocktail. My trance is so deep that my soul has left its body and is at present floating in the midst of the mysterious emerald aura coming from the hearts of all these ancient giants in this forest. As though I was flying with their spirits, we soared ...
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Poetry / Ashes of Roses
A very nice poem good job with the descriptions and mood of the writing. I also like the ending it fits quite well even though it is a little sad. But I suppose the slight sadness can not be helped. Keep up the good work.
Poetry / Personal
A very interesting piece usually I lean more toward shorter poetry but there was just something about this poem that drew me in. It has a rather sad vibe to it I don't know if that is intended or not maybe my own experiences are placing that vibe there but anyway. Although it is rather long I think it needs to be that way for the reader too truly appreciate the piece. Very good descriptive language and use of words as well. I look forward to reading more poetry by you. Keep up the good work.
Horror / THE HONEY TRAP
Ok I really liked the style you used and the descriptions that were in the story. I think however that you need to add a bit more suspense make it seem as though she might actually be rescued by the detective. Instead of the detective coming into the picture after her death. Other then that it was a nice fetish horror piece. Keep up the good work.
Very good piece the tension and suspense build nicely. They mystery of Flea is also very intriguing I can't wait to read more of this. I also like that the point of view is accurate and the bullies are not under played. Kids really can be rough to those who are different. Overall I really liked the piece and think it is defiantly worth pursuing a publisher about once completed.
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Poetry / Skinhead
Novel Treatments / Stone Soup Chapter 22
Poetry / Ashes of Roses

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