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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 05
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 05
im 15, im an aspiring writer and journalist, and i like to think myself orginal, so thats me really…...
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Why do bad things happen to good people? Why must good people always die young? These questions are rhetorical and impossible to answer. I have a true tale of such unfortunate event ‘rocking’ thousands of loving people’s lives. But I will focus on one particular case, so here is the story of Mr Smith: It all started so normally, no one could have suspected what was going to happen, Mr Smith carried out his usual routine that morning. He was on the train at 7 like always, he saw all the normal...
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Why do bad things happen to good people? Why must good people always die young? These questions are impossible to answer and rhetorical. I have a true tale of such unfortunate event ‘rocking’ thousands of peace loving people’s lives. But I will focus on one particular case, so here is the story of Mr Smith: It All started so Typical., so normal, no one could have suspected what was gonna happen, Mr Smith carried out his usual routine that morning, he was on the train at 7 like always, he saw ...
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Why do bad things happen to good people? Why must good people always die young? These questions are impossible to answer and rhetorical. I have a true tale of such unfortunate event ‘rocking’ thousands of peace loving people’s lives. But I will focus on one particular case, so here is the story of Mr Smith: It All started so Typical., so normal, no one could have suspected what was gonna happen, Mr Smith carried out his usual routine that morning, he was on the train at 7 like always, he saw ...
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Why do bad things happen to good people? Why must good people always die young? These questions are impossible to answer and rhetorical. I have a true tale of such unfortunate event ‘rocking’ thousands of peace loving people’s lives. But I will focus on one particular case, so here is the story of Mr Smith: It All started so Typical., so normal, no one could have suspected what was gonna happen, Mr Smith carried out his usual routine that morning, he was on the train at 7 like always, he saw ...
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ROAR, went the crowd, the suspense, the emotion, the whole realness of the situation, the reliving of the whole scene when Johnson made that last sprint for glory, only moments ago, a moment that will be remembered by many, my beloved Boston Red Sox have beaten the Los Angeles Angels finally, it has taken a good chunk of 10 year's, but we've done it that’s all that matters. A man hug's me; this was of course a heat of the moment thing. Claire, my beautiful sweet amazing (I could go on) girlfr...
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To put it simple. Your begining is simply not good enough. As i felt inclined to read on it actually starts getting pretty intresting, and so In short i would like to say; sort out the beginging and you may be on to something. Perhaps you should put it in 'chidrens' category though...
i really enjoyed this, i dont know this genre enough to judge you accordingly,but it does seem good from what i can see.
brillant describtiv peice you got here.
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