timeiswasting's profile
AGE:
24
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 22
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 22
my name is: erika
location: Atlanta GA
full time college student and full time waitress
age: 20
passions: bicycles and veganism
favorite read of the moment: revolution on canvas
also im a big elvis fan
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www.myspace.com/erika_nobody
becauseboysdontcry@yahoo.com
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i really like the ending, really brings it home. built a home in second place all I’ve found, with you, is grace so beautiful!
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good, to the point, i like the one word lines they makes for nice transitions
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i like the contrast of how a heart could be cold with happiness and also how reality could be unfamilliar. "my heart cold with happiness as I lowered you gently into unfamiliar realities." not what you would typicaly think... good job
i love the title very eye catching, and i am a big fan of the repetition at the end nice touch
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