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AGE: 35
LOC: Spencerville, OH
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I’m a political author. I wrote a book called “Madame President”. Check it out at: www.myspace.com/madamepresidentbook

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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Killer Machine (1-10 Chapters)
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Chapter One Killer Machine January 2, 2010 Langley, Virginia Cal Mitchell sat in his office in his underground home. He was supposed to be dead. Terrorists celebrated worldwide when bin Laden claimed his members killed him. Only a few people knew the truth and none of them were politicians. Why should they know? A little alcohol in their system and they’d tell anything and everything. Oh, did Mitchell have a surprise for terrorists all over the world, including America. If he played his cards...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Killer Machine
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Chapter One Killer Machine January 2, 2010 Langley, Virginia Cal Mitchell sat in his office in his underground home. He was supposed to be dead. Terrorists celebrated worldwide when bin Laden claimed his members killed him. Only a few people knew the truth and none of them were politicians. Why should they know? A little alcohol in their system and they’d tell anything and everything. Oh, did Mitchell have a surprise for terrorists all over the world, including America. If he played his cards...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Ultimate Supremacy
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Prologue Ultimate Supremacy January 20, 1964 Columbia, South Carolina Governor Rudy Ludendorff sat in his leather chair in the governor’s mansion. He wanted to become President so bad, to bring America to the ultimate supremacy, but time was running out. Rudy was fifty-four, and he was just sworn in as governor under mysterious circumstances. He was Lieutenant Governor when his boss mysteriously died after winning reelection by nineteen percentage points, giving Rudy the governorship. The pla...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Ultimate Supremacy
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Prologue Ultimate Supremacy January 20, 1964 Columbia, South Carolina Governor Rudy Ludendorff sat in his leather chair in the governor’s mansion. He wanted to become President so bad, to bring America to the ultimate supremacy, but time was running out. Rudy was fifty-four, and he was just sworn in as governor under mysterious circumstances. He was Lieutenant Governor when his boss mysteriously died after winning reelection by nineteen percentage points, giving Rudy the governorship. The pla...
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Poetry / Looked at Me
This is a pretty good love poem. There is always someone out there that will turn your life around in a positive way, but there is always plenty of people who will affect your life in a negative way. Here is one correction: all you did was look a(t) me Thanks for sharing this with me. God bless! Todd Ewing
Poetry / The Dream
This is a good poem. yet despite the “no”, the heart, still willing, This is my favorite part. No matter what, no matter how many times someone says no, keep up the spirit. God bles! Todd Ewing
This was pretty solid. I didn't know we fought with Sherman tanks against Japan. I learn somnething new everyday. Very good. Good luck selling it. I know it's not easy. God bless! Todd Ewing
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Twelve Bloody Days of Christmas- Chapter 4
This is a good chapter. There was good suspense, and it wanted me to read chapter five. This is the first chapter I read. If I read the first three, I'd probably be even more interested. How could they be killed with no drop of blood? It sounds like my professional assassin in my "Killer Machine" manuscript. He could pull it off...somehow. “I’m not sure Jake.” A comma should go between sure and Jake. I noticed that kind of stuff throughout the chapter. I know it's probably your first draft, b...
Novel Treatments / TEN DAYS
Well, what would his wife say if she found out about him going after a woman twenty years younger than him? That would add some suspense. It's a good thing they live miles away or something bad would have happened. Maybe he could visit her and face her. That would do it too. Does he have a job? There is different things you can do to spice things up. Thanks for letting me read it. Good luck with it. God bless! Todd Ewing
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