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AGE:
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LOC: Cleveland, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 18
LOC: Cleveland, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 18
I don’t really like the use of the word “I” or is it letter. Anyway who cares about “I”? I mean me. so it is hard to do these things. Anyway I am a rather successful real Estate agent in Cleveland, Ohio if you count the top 1% in sales as successful. But I would like to be a successful writer. Now this is a problem in that even though I was an English lit. major my grammar and spelling is atrocious. My attention span is terrible and patience? well forget it. But, here is the thing. By a strange combination of wealth and poverty, terrible tragedy and unusual circumstances I have lived a very unusual life to date. I also have a very good imagination. So what makes a great writer? Is it the sum of the writers experiences? For the most p…
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She was as pure as a wedding dress, and as whispy. beautiful blue eyes, lovely smile, she made me weak looking at her, her sun dress blowing she was walking, just walking, I, I stopped my car, in traffic when I saw her back and forth back and forth "can I help you?" I will do anything for this stranger. she looked up with those eyes, now four of us around her, we all melted. all loved her. "Ashley" she said. I'm four. walking alone down a busy street.
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"ok" I said."tell me another. No,no, let me guess ok?" he looked at me from his death bed. Black eyes, weary and bold but smiling. Like some sort of Santa Claus that had spent time in prison. Softly he spoke. "fine, try one." "lincoln?' I asked. "no, He was truly a great one though." "Jefferson, surely Thomas Jefferson." I looked at his weary body just 110 pounds now. "close, but no." "close you say...Franklin, of course!" He smiled, wide. "yes Ben was a good friend of mine." "his inventions...
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Of all the victories and all the sorrows. the yesterdays and tomorrows. All I ever am and All I'll ever be I owe it all to you for all you do for me.
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FORWARD. This book is really the cumulative result of a current dramatic change in my life. At the age of 43 I have owned businesses and worked at businesses that have succeeded and failed over the years. In the neighborhood where I live called West Park everyone seems to be a fireman, a policeman or a politician. Most of us are two and three generations in west Park and there is a certain comfort in that. This is Cleveland, Ohio but it could be any suburb in America with one exception. Becau...
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Well a typical day so far. I got mutant blood on my pants in the morning and watched a "jumper" go to the hospital for more medication. We go on runs and I wonder how they live. The second floor of some of the houses have no windows. When it is pouring rain the water just pours into the vacant upper floors. Doesn't anyone care about the damage to the house? I Try and understand the mentality. Sometimes you are taking someones blood pressure and there are roaches in their bed.They are not sur...
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Personally, to me it was interesting. other then that it was pretty bad.
I like the smell of the docs office.First person is hard to go along with. 2nd page. where are we going with this? Cleveland! yeah!!!! Fonz is good. combover is good, a little over done. 4th page. neat idea. do girls do this? nest two pages are going no where. It is like a personals ad not a story. Ok so the story is the pickup. GReat writing here! funny, witty, Different. back to mundane.references to the questionarre is good stuff. funny part with the awards type analogy. Also you seem inte...
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