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matt oneill is a 34 year old living in london with his wife and their dog, Ouzo.

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Short Story / Bear Bag
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Matt O'NeillSometimes with one I love I fill myself with rage for fear I effuse unreturn'd love,But now I think there is no unreturn'd love, the pay is certain one way or another,(I loved a certain person ardently and my love was not return'd,Yet out of that I have written these songs.)- Walt WhitmanSometimes with One I Love.Bear Bag The bony red fingers of a rock formation clutched at the sky to her left and the lazy tongue of a glacier lingered in the shadows of a distant mountain. She thou...
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Short Story / Language of the Blind
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Matt O'NeillLanguage of the Blind Ray Williams and his female accomplice, whose identity was not yet known, had held up a grain factory the day before and were heading South East. For the last week they'd kept ahead of the law by a few hours as they played connect-the-robberies with ten rural towns in the area. They weren't following any trajectory that the FBI could figure out and changed cars about five times daily. Everyone in town was on edge; the chief of police had deputized all out of ...
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The Second Burial of Marian Connelly by Matt O'Neill April 3, 1996 Third Draft FADE IN:EXT. KLAUGMAN'S PHARMACY--DAY--MARIAN It is 1962. The sun shines on the small town store front. Marian trots into the frame and enters the pharmacy. She is wearing a white sundress--the model of innocence.INT. PHARMACY--MARIAN & MR. KLAUGMAN Klaugman is wearing a white smock and stands behind the ice cream bar. He smiles at the young girl. Marian hops onto one of the stools. KLAUGMAN Morning, Marian. MARIA...
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Stage Play / Gossip
I enjoyed this. I think the author does a good job capturing the vocabulary and cadence of a post-Victorian world (especially those that would be present on the Lusitania and have attended Oxford). I found the setting and characters believable. Of course, you know what's coming in the end but the fun bit is seeing what's going to happen until then. Max Allen Collins is a master of these works, setting his stories against things like the Hindernburg disaster and toying with the reader's knowle...
Short Story / an empty tank of life
Interesting example of a short-short. I find myself wanting to know more about her. What arguing? I find it hard to tell if it's just a typical maudlin, suburban teenager, or someone who has a real need to escape. From the outward appearances, her life doesn't seem too rough...she's got 250 bucks, lots of material possesions (which, curiously, she decides are important enough to her to take on her escape), and seemingly all the creature comforts. Since I don't really know what's driving her a...
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