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AGE:
13
LOC: Portsmouth, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 08
LOC: Portsmouth, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 08
Hi! My name is Victoria Grace and I love to write! I write fantasy and poetry. I have only been writing for two years but I hope to further my carrier on this site. I also love to read and I play Steel drums! I lived in Virginia my whole life, but I hope one day to travle to Italy!
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I lay in my bed, as stiff as a bord. I knew they were there, out side my door, waiting, waiting for me. If I dare move, they might hear me and then they would take me away. They know I know. Every thing. If I told any one what I knew, they might kill me. Now they only want to take me away so I don't tell any one. The men-at-arms know I wouldn't tell, but there leader is stubborn and would not listen to me. There is but one among them that has been a friend to me, telling me when they will com...
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I lay in my bed,as stiff as a bord.I knew they were there,out side my door,waiting,waiting for me.If I dare move,they might hear me and then they would take me away.They know I know.Every thing.If I told any one what I knew,they might kill me.Now they only want to take me away so I don't tell any one.The men-at-arms know I wouldn't tell,but there leader is stubborn and would not listen to me.There is but one among them that has been a friend to me,telling me when they will come to capture me ...
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I...I truly feel your loss. Sorry. But this peice of art you have created could only make me see that.
Your words filled me with a sence of love. I totaly got what you were trying to get across. I'm not realy good at giving people critiques, so you're going to have to settle with compliments, is that okay? lol
I am a fairly new writer so I could never critique your work. Other than that I love it! I can't wait untill this book is published! I am content with the descriptiveness of the characters and scenery, and I wish to know more.
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