I am a fairly new writer so I could never critique your work. Other than that I love it! I can't wait untill this book is published! I am content with the descriptiveness of the characters and scenery, and I wish to know more.

Your words filled me with a sence of love. I totaly got what you were trying to get across. I'm not realy good at giving people critiques, so you're going to have to settle with compliments, is that okay? lol

I...I truly feel your loss. Sorry. But this peice of art you have created could only make me see that.