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AGE: 14
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 12

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Short Story / first paragragh
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Open the door out onto the white dusted street. yellow beems of light charge my week long shadow of a face, my shades protect my eyes from the uncalled for light. With out these glasses I would be blinded by the sun light. I pull the oversized hood over my head look at the ground and begin my walk. It snowed overnight and the streets and sidewalks are covered by two inches of snow. My mind is clouded by my week long shut in period. Most of the time I got high and watched old movies on TNT. Fo...
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Poetry / Else it
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I'm going for a cup of coffee and change my life New shirt and shoes and dump the strife I'm sick of trying so hard, its time for it all to come to me Lock myself up with my dog and a nice sack of weed Two weeks have now come and gone Nothing has come along Am I to strive to be something or be what I am Tell me the truth, I know theres no plan. You don’t know and you cant tell Only threaten the possibility of hell So be good boys and girls for now until ever Or be banished to hell for now and...
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Poetry / Teach Me
thats great. i really enjoy it. i'm sure you will find a lot of readers are going to be able to relate to this poem. and the tone and feeling of it is very real and appreciated.
Poetry / shattered
quite honestly i dont know if its a good poem or not, im not a critique. i liked it alot. its original and interesting and dark. thanks
Novel Treatments / Daddy Alb prologue
I want to read more, so thats good. as to grading for publishable quality and attracting an agent for first time publishing, i just dont know. i lack that judgment. i think the charecters will develope over time. it does create interest in the overall story line and whatever the hell was in that note.
I think you write a good poem on a opic that I'm not interested in at all. I dont mean that to be insulting. I enjoy your writing despite an immediate lack of interest. I enjoyed it for the way you write not the topic written about. I hope you take that as complimentary and I hope this is at least 25 words.
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