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AGE:
24
LOC: Germany
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 03
LOC: Germany
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 03
im just a normal guy i like to be creative outgoing and live life when i can. i joined the army in 2006 i ended up in germany getting ready for iraq my beautiful wife is still in the states and i miss her alot soon she’ll be here. i used to have no more insiration after a true love failed but i found my inspiration again.
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i look to you for strength even though you are fragile you mean life or death to me while i hold you i stop and think of all the time and fun we had of the quiet evenings at home of all the times i cried when i realized you were gone i can still feel you on my lips i still smell your fragance i can stil feel your curves on my hand i feel the bruises you have left its time to go forward with or without you looking at this clock i turn the cap and cheat on you again i moved on now i dont like y...
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Telling a lie is like losing your virginity. In the end you just get fucked.
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Following someone through the fire shows true loyalty .....but to get burnt is your own damn fault.
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Today you are here to hear a story. But this is no normal this is not some bedtime story you just curl up to and relax. No this is a story to make your stomach curl one sad riveting and surprising you wont believe it. I didn’t at first, but then of course these are actual events from my life, so the disbelief just fade for me but for you, ha you’ll have to read and believe whatever you want I don’t really care. So enjoy your normal people life and take it for what it is a story. Whatever. Cha...
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Remember our last days together? How you left me standing alone. How i never cried so much. While staring around our home. This used to be our house. We shared this bed right here. On the cold sad lonely nights I used to wipe your tears. Have you forgotten the love we had. the things i did for you. I opened up my heart. You stood there ready with knives. You took dead aim at my chest. The worst things you did to me, were the things that you did best. Look into this hole you left, This empty a...
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ok a little confusing to me i got lost but. no set rule on your writing try rearranging it a bit.
your poem throws a vibe of loneliness out, and i got lost close to the end there was a line that made no sense. double check the last to lines. but i like the style though so i can give it a bad rating just cant wait to read your improvement to it though. its potential is nice.
wow. i was entertained i finished it and was like damn. thank you for the good read.
great! i like the snow alot more now your poetry is full of emotion it flowed like liquid. only thing i can say negative is one line is missing something..."I need her touch to comfort Caress to keep us warm" something more should be there maybe like i need her touch to comfort. her carress to us warm. just a thought though good job.
this one is touching your reviewers comment, inspiring.i like the poem keep it up.
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