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LOC: Greenville, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 28
LOC: Greenville, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 28
This pen is but a pen, and this paper only that, but these words…these words can never be simply words; they are the shadows of my heart, begging for release from a place oftentimes empty and oftentimes dark, a place of fire and yet of ice…begging, and finding it here. Such is what it means to be a writer and so, for now, I defer to my pen to write, to write not merely with ink, but with the tears of my heart, enveloping my words with the deepest shadows of my memories.
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Night comes again and with it the time to rest, but its spent instead wandering amongst the shadows... An unwelcome visitor. Leave me ALONE! A cold smile. Arms encircling. Hands roving. Break free Run...Run...Run... Empty halls Here. There. No one to help Busy. No time. Not my concern. Scared. Hurt. Angry There! "Please. Who do I go to for help?" "Me." I tell him what happened. A name. The arms. The hands. He nods. Makes a note. Doesn't move Still no one to turn to Sinking down, down, down. B...
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The Worst Day of My Life I remember when we were talking one day I said it was the worst day of my life You pointed out I'd said that before maybe even twice I told you it was true last time and that it was true then That most every day was the worst of my life mostly because of them Did you know that every time I thought that they couldn't get worse They always did? More frequent too and you blamed me for the hurt You blamed me because I was always angry and because I would fight You wouldn'...
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Sexual Harassment: Nothing Routine about It Sexual harassment is defined as unwanted sexual advances, unwelcome requests for sexual favors, or other behavior of a sexual nature where such conduct has the purpose or effect of unreasonably interfering with an individual’s academic or work performance or of creating an intimidating, hostile, or offensive environment. Sexual harassment is often seen as casual, even if frequent, brushing of one’s body against areas of another’s body, and as having...
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When her shorts were too short and his pants were sagging When she was late for class and his grades were lagging When he dyed his hair purple got in fights in the hall When she got her tongue pierced middle of last Fall When he back-talked the teacher one day at school When he got sent out of class for flaunting the rules When she lit up a cigarette during school hours When they chose to have sex in the school showers You saw that You saw them holding hands in the halls Shmoozing and talking...
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Daughter, what did you learn in school today? Twas a question asked regularly Oft she would say “nothing” or “not much” As is said by many teens But if she could have put into words What it was she’d learned Here’s what she would have said Of the lessons that can’t be earned: “Today I learned that ‘no’ isn’t enough That the teachers don’t that much care I learned no matter where I go That he will be there If not today, then likely tomorrow From his eyes, I can’t get away He kept watching me, ...
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Vague and distant, yet with moments of perfect clarity--exactly as I remember feeling after learning of the deaths of two friends of mine, a year apart. The perceptive nature of his daughter, yet the apparent cluelessness of his, I guess younger, son. The lines that I think lent the most to this piece are: The house on top of the hill seemed huge, imposing... Then she was more of a smell to me than anything else— Flour-covered dough, chicken broth, and old books. It imposes the finality of de...
That one can speak of so many things. Given your choice of opportunities, can we assume that this quote refers to that last period of time when you're writing something, and you haven't quite figured out how you want to phrase it, but then you have it? Kudos.
Thats the way for most of us, I think. Best of luck to you. --"bad memories, treating myself, started writing"
Very good. The rhyme scheme and rhythm seem off here and there, like conch vs. 1 and "be a number 1", better phrased w/o 'a'. All in all, though, the rhythm and imagery remind me of an island beach scene with the drums, conchs, and rhythmic dancing. Kudos.
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