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AGE:
26
LOC: Anza, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10
LOC: Anza, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10
I have been writting since I was 7 years old, I know I am not a pro by any means. I love writting it seems to help when nothing else can. Since I was small its been my sancuary a place to run to and release, without fear of rejection or humiliation. When someone reads what I write they see into my soul, into the very depths of who I am and how I feel. I have never written anything I didn’t feel. I just want to get better and someday be published. I also am very much into Music and hope someday to turn some of my poetry into lyrics.
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My broken heart pounds relentlessly, My hands and my soul quivery endlessly, And even though I love you this deeply, There is only emptiness here and calamity, Each shallow breath hurts more than the last, And every tear scars deeper with its pass, I can't breathe anymore... I can't see anymore... And I don't understand why I even feel... Anymore... Theres only this lonliness, Theres only this emptiness and hopelessness, The clairvoyance of this confusion rules my soul... I.. cant.. stay... t...
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This place is quiet and dark, Can anyone hear me, Its so small, damp and empty, Is there anyone there, Here in this hole I've dug, I am all alone, The silence is deafening, Its consuming me, Here in this shallow tomb, Here in my memories, Years I have spent here, In this solitude, Where my failures engulf me, My torture commences, And forever I will remain Here.... In my mind
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I love you more than anyone should love another, Its dangerous, and now I pay the price, And still, I stand here unswayed by the silence, Dieing inside searching for a single reason, It’s obvious, you know not of this love I have, Each morning beginning with thoughts of you, Every single activity clouded in my mind as I day dream, The nights empty and quiet until I fall into deep sleep, It is only here where my mind deceives me, Here my heart rests and heals until daylight, Where the shallow ...
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Silent emptiness has consumed my mind, I have been numb inside for quite some time, But you inspire me by simply being, The creativity in each breath you take is intriguing, This spectacular light show is set off in my mind, By your enchanting smile, a precious necessity of mine, My minds ablaze with thoughts and passions, My dreams come alive in vibrant fashions, But every time you touch me the world stands still, Warmth engulfs me and I loose my will, I am afraid of this feeling yet I yearn...
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This feeling’s overwhelming, Like an uncontrollable urge, My heart, it pounds violently, These thoughts I cannot purge, I find myself aloft routinely As if the clouds are now my home, Apprehensively I search for you, There is so much I wish to know, Relentlessly my body shudders, I cannot bear this insecurity I think those words yet cannot say, Such fear will soon engulf me, All day long, my heart it aches, I yearn for just your voice, And here within the silence now, I know I have no choice,...
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I like this its descriptive it brings all the horror back to the quivering nucleus of one's soul. I don't have the answers to the ratings... I don't rate to rate you. Thank you for sharing.
33.3333% Review Quality (3 Votes)
I like the ideals here, I think you have something to draw from, I feel there is more detail more personal expression that can be put into this piece. The other thing is the rhyming, it does not flow, you do then you don't... just my thoughts on it.
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Well, I like what you were going for I don't like the flow it is interrupted by the spontaneous rhyming that is through out. It is interesting and thought provoking I do like that.
This is interesting, repetitive but I like it nonetheless, I think the the typos cause a break in the readers thought process its like slamming on the breaks, you loose your train of thought.
No if that isnt the truth.. I don't know what is.. Nice
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