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AGE:
19
LOC: Trenton, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 19
LOC: Trenton, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 19
I’ve been writing for about five years give or take a few. Writng is one of my favorite things to do. I write poetry and short stories, and I’ve found that’s a really good way to vent.
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The things that matter the most to you now, Are usually the things that you always took for granted. Meaning, you never kept track of them when they started, But you were just in time to record the ending. When it's over, gone, and done with, You realize that it played a big part in your life. Everyday you wake up, there's a void. A chunk of you is missing. Realizing your error, You pray day after day to have it back. To restore the order to your life. You never realize what you have... Until...
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Two tears from each eye, But no more came. It seemed like forever I waited, And all I got was four. I want to cry, To unburden my soul. I want to release my pain, But all I feel is empty and cold. I don't bother to wipe the tears away. Down my face and down my chin they stray. Seeping into my pores and drying. My face feels stretched and tight. Like my lonely heart. Why do I keep doing this to myself? Letting my guard down, For those who don't deserve it. They treat my heart with all the tend...
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Sticks and stones, May break my bones, But it's the words, That usually kill me. Words cut deeper than an ordinary knife, Whose wounds heal up, and then are forgotten, Words cut deep and heal only from the outside, Leaving the inside still sore and raw.
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Soulmate. Listen to the words. SOUL mate. Soulmates, has nothing to do with age, But it has everything to do with the soul. Souls are very old things. Old souls are people reincarnated from another world. Many of the people brought together today, Were couples way back in their past lives. Searching through this new world, Searching for one another, So that they may once again be in love. Some brought back younger, Some brought back older, But their hearts and souls are just the same. Seeking...
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Pregnancy is an illness. Symptoms include nausea, headaches,sensitivity to light, sounds and smells. As your condition worsens, A tiny parasite begins to form in your urethra, And gradually expands over a period of time. The parasite feeds off your nutrients, Leaving you hungry and in a state, Where you are plagued by some of the most strangest urges. Combining the most strangest of things. You stuff yourself in haste, To feed yourself and to satisfy the appetite, Of the thing growing within ...
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Wow. I really felt the bitterness and anger in this one. When I was reading, it was like I could actually hear it being yelled out. This poem may offend some overly religious folk, but then again not everything is meant for everyone...One thing about this piece that threw me off, was how you have half of a sentence in one paragraph and the other half in another. You may want to think of another way to arrange this..Otherwise, I really liked it.
I like this. You described the events in such a 'real' way. I hope that makes sense to you. From reading this I can see things from your point of view. I liked how you let the poem speak for itself instead of coming out and saying that you're against the violence of war.
Your description is so vivid. Everything is written so that it seems to jump out at you when you read it. I literally got so wrapped up in it that I almost forgot to breathe...as if the smog were closing in on me. Very good
I like this one. You can't think too much when reading it or you'll lose some of the meaning. There's a lot written in here about roads and wrong directions. I like the use of the 'spider web'. It kind of gave me the feeling that someone was trying to mislead you and trap you, and you found out a little too late. It was deep.
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