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LOC: Haiku, HI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22
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I Have Cocaine on Speed Dial TV Mott I really love Cocaine. I mean I used to really love Cocaine. No, I admit, I still, really, really love Cocaine, I just don’t get to cocainize anymore. No more getting coked. Not for the time being. I capitalize Cocaine because it is my friend and my enemy, an actual entity that started out as a small pile of finely ground little powder in a folded up page from my latest copy of Playboy Magazine that morphed itself into a friend, a significant other, or lov...
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Kentucky Summers TV Mott As long as I can remember, at least as far as I can think back to the earliest memories of my childhood, I remember spending my summers in Kentucky. We lived in Arizona but my mom who was raised in western Kentucky in a small farming town would send me back to her home town every summer to stay with her parents on the farm. In retrospect it was an invaluable opportunity, I even think while it was happening I even knew back then that it was an opportunity that was spec...
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Questions for Our Leader If I grabbed you by the balls and slapped you with Iraq would you feel it? If I grabbed the burning Twin Towers and shoved one up each of your nostrils would you smell it? If I bent you over and shoved Kuwait and all of its burning oil fields up your arrogant white ass would you remove that smug look from your face? If a hurricane swept your life off its pretty Texan foundation would you quickly take action and move into the Superdome? You Our Leader Need to Offer Som...
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Write Write like crazy Write like every word is abreath A heart beat A lover A mother A brother Take care of your Crazy words They are yours No one likes them Unless they like Them And that Means Nothing Too You Because they are your words Not Anything else but your Crazy WORDS
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“Admire as much as you can: Most people do not admire enough.” Vincent Van Gogh Butterflies It seemed as if everything was beginning to move in slow motion as I was reading the very real expression less than illuminating her face. This was the end. I wasn’t sure why it was over and was not sure how it would unfold but it was most assuredly the end. It was the end of a current reality and the end of a once possible eternity. Gone was all of me that had been planted in her heart, fertilized by ...
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This is either brilliant or pathetic. SInce I can find nothing to associate it to in the pathetic sense it must be brilliant! SIX WORDS IS DIFFICULT TO APPLY JUDGMENT ON ANYTHING. Ooops capitals sorry.
Hilarious! If humor is the intent you have accomplished satirical genius. I to would hope to achieve a Whitmenesque like legacy. If Urbis is my vehicle to such a legacy I hope the literary gods forgive me. Keep trying, I can't wait until the next installment. You are one funny individual.
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