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AGE: 17
LOC: Lima, OH
GEN: Female
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Poetry / insight
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Look in thy glass and tell the face thou viewest Now is the time that face should form another, Whose fresh repair if now thou not renewest, Thou dost beguile the world, unbless some mother. For where is she so fair whose uneared womb Disdains the tillage of thy husbandry? Or who is he so fond will be the tomb Of his self-love to stop posterity? Thou art thy mother's glass, and she in thee Calls back the lovely April of her prime; So thou through windows of thine age shalt see, Despite of wri...
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You can't be sad if your smileing
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Poetry / Dreaming
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I MUST HAVE BEEN DREAMIN TO THINK MY MOM WAS GOING TO CHOOSE ME OVER DRUGS. I HAD TO BE DREAMIN TO THINK THAT I WOULD COME FIRST IN HER LIFE. I COULDN'T HAVE BEEN AWAKE TO SEE MY MOM BE A PROSTITUTE!! COULD I HAVE BEEN AWAKE TO FEEL ALL THAT HURT AND PAIN. COULD I HAVE BEEN AWAKE TO SEE MY MOM GET ARRESTED IN FRONT OF ME? I WISH I COULD WAKE UP BUT THIS DREAM IT JUST TO STRONG. WILL I EVER WAKE UP? CAN I EVER WAKE ? I HOPE I WAKE UP SOON THIS DREAM IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!
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Poetry / Beyonce
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Best of the r@b singers how the words flow form her mouth, she makes all the others look like crap. Its a shame how she has all her rythmes on lock down no other can touch. Kelly, Michele, jessica or no other ain't got nothing on her! If you heard her, or seen her, you would know what I mean but until then don't hate congratulate!
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Quotes / why
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Why all the hurt and pain, sometimes I wonder is that all it is to life, if not then why so much of it?
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Quotes / I Pissed God Off
i think this gives readers something to think about. like why is this happening to me today or why did that happen to me not many people stop and think that maybe the reason why their going threw what they are going threw is because the made God mad at them people should really stop and take a look at that. i think you made a very good point when you stated that i believe thats just what people needed to hear. good luck in the future.
Quotes / Beauty
Locked
I liked this it is very true God is always there and always has some encouraging words for you I don't think you need to change a thing it good the way it is.
Children's / Playing House
I think that this story had good flow to it but I think that its in the wrong section I think it sounds more like a poem than a story. I also think that when you write your stories that there should be a little bit of truth in them seeing as we all know that that is not the way its going to happen.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Burned Out on Love
I agree with you you can't make people feel like they deserve to be loved and that you can't fix someones pain after you hurt them and exspect them to forgive you just because of love. I think that it your writtings that you should atleast try and give the reader some advice or to make the writting more visual to where the reader can visualize what they are reading.