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AGE:
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LOC: Wahiawa, HI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Wahiawa, HI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
I haven’t been on here in years. I guess it’s time to update my information and possibly post some new stuff.
My name is Nicole, I’m 18 years old and am currently going to Heald College in Honolulu, Oahu, Hawaii. I’ve recently added a new addition to my family (and when I say my family, I mean just me), his name is Joshua M Timmons and he’s the love of my life. We got married Oct 8th, 2007 at Ko Olina Oahu Lagoon #4 at 5:45PM HST and it was the most beautiful thing in the world. I could not ask for a more loving and caring husband.
He is currently deployed, and while deployed I’m working on my AAS in Medical Assisting here at Heald College. I’m in my second quarter and in total I’ll be done with my major in 18 months-Now 17-.
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sometimes i wonder do you even know my name i sit in silence and wonder if you knew would it be the same if you knew how i felt knew everything else would you think of me in the same way or would you think of me oh so differently so many secrets locked inside my head. Tell me why why i love you so much tell me how i sit here longing for your touch tell me when when will you figure out that i exist you've just gotta tell me why. sometimes when i'm sleeping i dream you're right there by my side...
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She wears black, the color of sorrow; Infinite pain. Trying to find what she may lack. She throws a bit of red into the mix, a color of love. Or a color of control? No, it's just a temporary fix. She sees and hears but cannot feel Why does this happen? No one knows, forever surreal. Then something shows, Something bright. But can she see it? Let her happiness flow? Yes, but back in the haze. Nothing is recognizable, Her happiness seems to have been a delusion. Back into the eternal, dark Maze.
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All the times, She said she loved me, I figured it wasn’t true. Turns out I was right. Everything she did, She said it was because she loved me, I thought it was just to get under my skin. Turns out I was right. Every time she says “I love you” I tell myself “just say it back.” No harm in that, right? I hope I’m right. What do you do when you’re mistaking love? Someone help me solve this please. I’m pretty sure I need someone, Someone to help me realize what’s true. As I write this down, I wo...
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What more can I say than I love you? No other words can have more meaning. Three little words to take one's heart and soul and drown them in eternal happiness. Sweet sensations fill them and linger in you forever. How can one show any stronger emotion? Any other phrase is nothing but an inadequacy. Love is one feeling unto itself. Nothing can rival it, nor come equal. But when one loves another to such a point, that not even I love you is meaningful enough, what then? I could give you a never...
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I woke up this morning so happy to find you there Because every night before I fall asleep I wonder if you'll stay How many times have I cried? Because of the depth of my my love Because I'm so scared of losing you Because emotions so intense are drowning me You think I'm crazy (for thinking so little of myself) (for thinking you'll find someone funnier, smarter, sexier... better) (for thinking you'll go) You forget that I'm not used to being happy not used to being adored and that I'm just w...
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This is good, but you're right it does need to be touched up. The raw passion and directness is a great approch. It does jump around but it meshes well. Good work. . You should let me know when you update it.
Overall this was a good poem. It could use more detail, but it has a good meaning,hits close to home.
It was good, although it is a bit confusing. It jumped and wasn't focused. I'd go back and fix the spelling mistakes and the capitalzation. OTher then that it was pretty good
I like this. It had alot of raw open emotion and the message was great. I just hope this isn't a true story, if it is I'm truly sorry.
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