I like the strong use of imagery. The subject matter is very familiar. The despondency of being postmodern and youth, which makes it easy for this 20-somtthing to relate to. The line "spinning till we're dizzy like children once again" sticks with me. It gives the image of something ideal and lost, and something that's trying to be recaptured or maintained by the speaker throughout the song. I'm not sure if I the dialogue in the beginning works, if it's for a musical then it's excellent, if i...

I did not finish reading this peice. From what I read it is a stereotypical late adolescent rant about identity issues. Not that the subject matter is not worth discussing. However, this peice does not do so artfully. I learned an importent lession in High School English class; "Show not tell". The author does not show the audience anything about his particular identity, experience, or personal development. Overall this peice is not terribly creative or structurely sound. I suggest that you r...

I think this quote would sell in the same type of store that sells posters of "Everything I needed to know I learned in Kindergarden". If that was the intent of the writer s/he has succeded. I think this would be an excellet seller for inspirational posters, calenders, and such. However it does not appeal to my personal taste.

This statement is a mix-matched soup of famous quotes and common sentiments. I do not find anything about this peice particularly creative, intriguing, or original.

Did you ever read Hier Nietzsche? Thus spoke Zarasuthra is about hope and perservence despite loss and despair. I might have actually liked the line if it wasn't a perverion of Nietzsche. Thankyou for spelling his name correctly.

This is a good strategy. However I kinda like that we have to work for our review and earn our keep here. I also like the rating system.