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AGE: 23
LOC: Tuscaloosa, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 30

I love to write.  It’s more than a hobby to me, it’s therapy.  I’ve used writing since I was an elementary school babe to get rid of fustration or anger or just to calm my senses.  I love the way it clears my mind of nothing but what I’m trying to create.  It’s become apart of who I am.  Writing is like breathing but instead of expelling air I let go of my emotions and let them flow through my fingers forming a moment, a thought, a feeling that is captured forever.  It is the ulitmate immortality in a dying world.  Poetry has been my poison for a while now.  I started with stories but over the years I have developed a real love for writing poems.  I guess because poetry is whatever your feeling…there are no rules.  

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Short Story / Attempted
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The nipping and biting stalker lurked through the dark sidewalks of the campus. A few ballsy night owls still scrambled over the maze of the concrete huddling closer to their jackets and parkas as it passed over. The post-midnight air gushed spiraling succulence within that sly, chaotic wave of coldness sending icicles following in its misty shadow. Cutting a path and coercing a disdainful layer of dew on anything that lay in its wake, the wayward specter surged on seeking the discarded and t...
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Poetry / father dearest
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Footsteps echo down the hall Brass turns, jiggles Locked A voice calls questioning Eyes shut tighter Yelling ensues Ranting hand against wood A ball of limbs and heart Shiver within a cover of forlorn Giving under a heavy hand Splinters fly Last defense gone The storm erupts Unpredictable As the skin is ripped away Only a shell remains Beats skip, heart in hand Bent, deformed over tear damaged bed The cobra strikes Leather and metal tear at flesh Eyes flaming, hand clenched Another and anothe...
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Poetry / Never Love
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As a city misses the blackened stars In the bright night life i As a caged king misses the golden earth In a home never known miss As a mother misses the almost baby In a box still and cold you Love was gone before it began But even if I never knew you I miss you
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Poetry / Never Love
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As a city misses the blackened stars In the bright night life As a caged king misses the golden earth In a home never known As a mother misses the almost baby In a box still and cold I miss you Love was gone before it began But even if I never knew you I miss you
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Poetry / Run
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Tick Tock Tick Tock Silk gowns and penguin suits Part Only you and him Alone The lover’s dance Tick Tock Tick Tock One song, one Heart The music enchants You Eternity in his eyes Tick Tock Tick Tock Both hands strike Twelve The decision, Stay Or do you … The illusion parts Leaving him alone With nothing left but his heart And a small piece of you Left behind at the stroke of twelve While he wanted to stay You had to
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Novel Treatments / SEABURY (2nd Installment)
by mannequingirl
Savage. This piece is raw to the bone. I love your storyline it is very original, gruesome, and shows a modern truth. Your character development is my favorite part though. I have not read the first installment and I admit the story is some what confusing with out having done so but I don't need to have read it to know that you have some massive skills in writing.
Short Story / You Can Be Lawrence
by riotinto3
I like it. It has a kind of everyday darkness to it that a reader just can't quite put down. Very nice. Oh and your dialogue is superb. Also your descriptions are very nice as well. Don't change a thing.
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Poetry / frugal bastard
by berzerkkenobi
You know you have to be seriously addicted when you write a poem about urbis. Its humourous in a dark kind of manner. You rhythm and tone really fit what your going for. The rhyming is a little sketchy but works for this piece for some reason. Overall good.
Poetry / Humor
by dalost1
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Moon and Shadow
by Dennis
I like your story... it's good. The storyline was well thought out and your writing shtyle fit your story. There are two things that I see wrong with it though. First your dialgoue needs some work... Some of it's ok but then some is just not quite there as far as a published novel should be. Then you have quite a few grammar problems but other than that good first draft. Good luck with editing.
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