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Over time I obviously have changed and matured in my writing. I started this when I was fourteen, and only have posted two things. Well working on the Dark Angel story has been an accomplishment, I have finished it and now all I need to do is type it out and edit it. Which is what I am doing, while balancing my Junior year of High School. I am Sixteen Years old, obviously intelligent, but love to act like a moron. The only way I can express my stupidity is through writing. Hence why I am on here.
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two different blurbs of Dark Angel. A story of a young woman finding her way in life. *** Artemis is the greek goddess of the hunt and the moon. Artemis dwelled on this definition of her name ever since she was five years old. Her father had taught her it. Now he is gone and so is her mother. Her mother murdered, her father abducted what more did she have left? Artemis thought she had lost everything the day her father had been abducted but her mother never really hit her as hard. Right befor...
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fear runs deep around me running as high as sorrow All my fears binding me, how can I break free? In the world of the living dead I stand free and alone But as I think upon it, I shudder in fear They stare at you with dead cold eyes knowing the greatest fear My fears all suffocate me and soon I will die. Please help me! The walls are closing in My fears are all around Please help my one last plea. Don't make one more fear come true!
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Depending on what kind of music you put with this and how you sing this, this would be a song that I would listen to. Though this sounds more like an Emotional song, it should have something more than the sickness and love. Maybe anger, lash out at the woman who had hurt him so.
This sounds like it has something. But not all the way there just yet. It could have been composed a little better, such as the melodies, you could have described out they surrounded you etc.
Wow...I have to say that was a little... Odd. Anyways maybe between the two last lines have something describing what exactly you did. Because for all we know you could have been knocked out, dragged somewhere, and then buried in China! XD
Alright! Well I am Unsure of what exactly you are saying. Is this an incerpt about fathers raping thier children i.e. incest. Or are you speaking of something completely different? Maybe you should be a little more descriptive.
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