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AGE: 16
LOC: Garland, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 12

I’m 15, going on 16 in October, I love poetry, art, and music. I also love the dark, vampires(vampyres), and anything mental(to fit my mind), I’m always sad (for some strange, unknown reason) and depressed, I also have many suicidal thoughts. Getting through a time were I did a very stupid thing to myself, for someone I thought truely cared about me.

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Poetry / 4ever
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4Ever u and me 4Ever we will be 4Ever I will love you 4Ever that is true 4Ever and ever 4Ever u and me 4Ever we will be  
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Non-fiction / tired of peoples's shit
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Some how I knew, I knew it was just some fucking joke, that he didn't really want me. Hell, even I don't want me, and I can't change that. He promised, but I should have known no one would want me. I'm so fucking stupid, I believed him when he told me he loved me. It was all a big fucking lie. But I knew, I truley did, but again I fell for a trick. I can't even fathom why I even try anymore. I just end up the punch line of something someone finds so fucking hilarious. But you know what? I fuc...
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Poetry / upon paper lined
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tainted, painted, fainted, pained your face in my mirrors mind i write this letter upon paper lined longing for lost love tired, trying, time letter on paper lined seeing you in minds eye core of my existance sick, sorry, stiffled longing for your laugh starring, strong, struggling to fight away the pain scared, stilled, sailing upon paper lined my words flow freely in this letter ryhmed
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Lyrics / cutting deeper
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Shaking hands, unsupportive knees, won't you help me please???? Judging people here and there, what happed to never judge other? chorus) cutting deeper, deeper still, the blood doesn't want to flow this day (end chorus Up and over, over and out, I won't give in without a doupt. People killing others, judging is their game, the more you judge, the more you will be judged. chorus) cutting deeper, deeper still, the blood doesn't want to flow this day (end chorus  
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Poetry / I'm sorry!
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I'm sorry I'll never be pretty, I', sorry I'm around, I'm sorry you have to spend time with me, not because you want to, but because you have too. I'm sorry I'm always a third party when you don't want me. I'm sorry I'm alive. I'm sorry I have issues. I'm sorry. I'm sorry i'm not smart, blond, or thin. I'm sorry my taste in music is so 'old school.' I'm sorry I can't die.
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It's really easy to follow and very descriptive.
Poetry / Insomnia
"Remembering how the friendship strted" is, I think, a nice way of telling your friend you still think of them, "A single kiss blown to the wind In hopes that it finds you tonight" to me shows that you also still care for your friend. I think it's, overall, like telling your friend you miss him/her, and that they are doing alright.
Young Adult / Black Magic - Chapter 3
I like the way you went about the baseball scene with Bret's young neice, its very cute, and very highly possable.
wow, I like "my carriage awaits I mustn't tarry with you any longer or I'll be late", i just really like it. no good at reviews, sorry!