vetox20's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: Selden, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 18
LOC: Selden, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 18
My personal website:
http://theendfall.net
A brief history for all you people who like…you know. History.
This is the culmination of five or six years, (I can never remember) of website work, authoring, alcohol, wasting time and good friends. Originally my work was hosted on vetox.sherlok.net. The site was very plain and simple and I called it Ascape – The Last True Haven. It was a success with my little-to-no HTML knowledge and people began to read.
It mainly held my writing but over time other people wanted to join up and express themselves. The site grew and shrank, I added galleries and forums. They broke and got hacked. People got pissy and everyone left. Who knew?
The work you now see is tempered and fit to a much mor…
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this was supposed to be a serenade this was supposed to be something beautiful something witty something pure and true yet you’ve pulled from me the last vestiges of kindness of patience, of humility, of constant compromise i sit with alcohol in hand, the burning in my gut just like the burning in my ears of your excuses, your justifying, your petty little games your friends and your downfalls i usually would just ignore but know that now they’ve entered my home my heart my mind you sit and y...
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two point oh, next version next time, next place, next exit im comin to you on a stretcher make dad proud helpin brother dearest download tears before all thats real is gone next turn, next job, next love digitized, trivialized, patronized until stone becomes fleshy fruit we sit, we play, til dead do us part of the machine the status quo rules the farm but the drunk polished singer says you cant make it as a bayman with bayonets, barbed wire, telephones ghosts of vineyards and stock markets d...
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the moons is above and beyond me but its shape changing and looking down to hold me take me but the faces just changed they both want the moon for themselves these greedy grimey cumulonimbus clouds that rock back and forth and make new faces, orange and painted red they swirl while i smoke my cigarette and they say mistake i knew it was a mistakle but i needed to try and if i could somehow get a bit of lunar warmth and understanding i would undertstand why they were playing frisbee with the m...
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. a delicate tactician, marvelled under me as precise nails dug into the foundation of my spine it was such a lovely battle scene blood and sweat blood and sweat all over the two of us her eyes were glazed blue as mine became hazy white she never told me when she wanted me to stop she never mentioned when i should pull my troops out she never guided me anywhere else but deeper harder into conflict frenzied only for her into velvet painted masochistic bliss oh my dear tactician, she checked my...
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On the horizon looms my keeper Cold and vicious, pale and colored cruel Slowly filling my cruel cup with it’s bloody drops Waning patience as the it waxes overhead, I feel the change boil over Quickly turning delicate presence with overhead callousness I fall to my knees, fall to my vices, fall on my sword Sworn and swollen and steadily declining, this unforgiving mistress has me tied to the table Twisting around my hopes into anxiety, dreams into electrostatic I swing, I miss, I swing, I con...
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Excellent children's poem. I'd love to read more. Not much more to say other then keep writing :)
Something in this screams power. I would love to know what the inspiration for this was as it seems very motivated. The flow was very good and your descriptors and imagery also assisted in this very gritty poem. Definitely worth polishing and trying to submit for professional review. Eliatt
10 out of 10. I remember a time of my own that felt just like that. Extremely well written and the orange juice imagery worked flawlessly. Kudos.
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