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AGE:
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LOC: Pasadena, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 25
LOC: Pasadena, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 25
Having quibbled with my ideology pertaining to higher education, I remain confident that my decision to decline further schooling will prove most beneficial.
The credential of ‘college educated’, I feel, will taint the perspective of my work.
I write and I am interested in Dark Humor, Romanticized Depression, Brutally Intellectual and mind bending satire, creative writing and twisted short stories. I have a love for the rebellious, offensive and unorthodox, while maintaining a unique sophistication. I appreciate the works of Todd Solondz, David Lynch, H G Wells, E E cummings, and various creative writers.
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"Tremendous dissatisfaction would soon replace my seldom compromised contentment, abase this merry-go-round of pleasure and misery upon which we endlessly turn..." Crowds shuffling below the window's view championed my patience as another sheet of paper, stained with my hopeless graffiti, found its way crushed and buried among the waste. Indeed I would have to explain my eventual departure and continued absence, however long I should have to endure the struggle to discover each delicate wor...
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Flipping through the channels, on a boring Sunday afternoon, I was suddenly taken in by the insurmountable force of the Home Shopping Network. What were they trying to sell now? A composite of old video games packed into one system! Ecstatic joy tingled through me as I, in a hypnotized daze, imagined the possibilities: “I could play all those games without ever changing a cartridge! I could finally sell my Nintendo ‘cause I wouldn‘t need it any longer!” The telephone rang, but I as usual, ha...
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"When I'm walking I hate cars, While I'm driving I hate pedestrians."
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Robert Bought a Gun. Was he going to shoot him? Robert killed his wife.
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What's a name? All I know is that she was a young, gorgeous, blonde, indie rocker gal who could really put down a Mai Tai! I don't know why, or even how it happened, but she thought her ‘Blur' CD would sound better on my stereo. It was like some benevolent beacon of fortune wrought its meritorious beam onto the collection of assorted misery that is I. Though I’ve before only seen her veiled and cloaked, surely this was the girl of my dreams. We exchanged romanticized dialogue, and a spot of '...
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"Between raindrops, <-comma? everything is dry, nothing is confusing, everything is calm everything is quiet. " I would get rid of "nothing is confusing" "The last rain drop is forgotten, the next is unknown. When it hits its alarming, but then it splashes to the ground " but then it splashes to the ground? I would change that. "and then again I find myself, between raindrops." Why? You should embellish the ending. Your poem has potential, but lacks content. It's thought provoking and intr...
Your rhyme scheme is repetitive and elementary. This sounds like a 'Poison' song on speed. Try to convey your emotions through more romantic or passionate wording. Your level of writing generates little impact. Though you may have valid expressions, I suggest you dabble into more advanced literary notation and set a goal to increase your writing level. I'll give you a 3.
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