w84gdo's profile
AGE:
46
LOC: KC, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 08
LOC: KC, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 08
I am a poet living in middle america (the buckle of the bible belt, is more like it…).
My first book, “Terra” was released in 2004 (www.unholydaypress.com). I have two books scheduled for release this year: “the Darker Side of Light” and “A Once and Future War”.
I own a used bookstore (www.prosperosbookstore.com), and i’m executive director of a literary nonprofit (www.writersplace.org)
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At first, the offering of a single toe, breaking the mer, releasing a surface tension built of 330 million miles square of earth's surface: not to hot; not too cold. In a pile, discarded the soiled, faux epidermis, abandoned to mustify in the corner of the bathroom until the mood is right or 'til one's wife, grown tired of stepping over, snaps then, and only then, will the refuse, this discarded shell of a crab, be spirited away to the hamper A distant cousin to a drowning, related within the...
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GRAVITATING It all starts when you're eight. The screen door slams and you leap off the porch into summer. You can hear your mama's voice calling after, clear as sunshine, "Keep away from that creek!" But the pull of toads and turtles, rock dams and leaf armadas is too great then your best friend, Mr. Too Much Time, leans in, whispers in your ear and off you go The next morning, they're talking at the breakfast table, how the storm came, how the Thompson kids were all playing down at "that pu...
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A Phone Call To Nowhere Why there? Why was it placed there and for what purpose? -- assuming there ever was a purpose all recollection is now faded, gone with those who died or moved on, carried away by a Mojave wind, leaving only stainless steel, wire and molded plastic to mummify beneath a thirsty desert sun. And so, the telephone booth stands, its glass shot out, beneath a lone, tar-covered pole. A thin black wire plays out from booth to pole, from pole to pole to pole, stretching across d...
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Of Being of being, i am not so quite tired, yet and so, with a shave, a button and a brush (a clean shirt -- if i can find one), i push about the stuff of appearance -- skin and hair, fashion and aspiration -- mold an image (a tad more passable) for all those interested others. and thus, off i'll go, if not into the wild blue, at least into the yonder unlived hours. and like all the children upon whom the minutes descend begging admittance, how it is that i will fill them is up to me, though ...
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Small Rooms Down from the apartments down from the bed-sits and walk ups down stairwells and dimly lit corridors hurrying, at the day's final fading up urgent streets, bats at sunset, oyumel-hungry monarchs indentured to millennia-old instincts Inuit, trudging in sealskin boots crossing the narrow dilemma between another evening in and the bench-warrant ardor to pull close dusky collars against the first seasonal flurries of oh, how i hate to be alone. Brightly-lit, holiday furloughs, now res...
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we all love good, juicy sex - if we aren't dead (even if we are afraid to admit it in public - i reside at the buckle of the bible belt). But sex is a subject that EVERYONE and their brother/sister/whatever writes about. So, to be truly 'steamy' - and not risk being just tired or a retread - it has to be extremely creative. this appears to be a very personal poem between you and someone else (unless its a character). it takes a certain courage to put this sort of personal material out for pub...
dark and juicy. what about trying a sister poem? keep your last line - it is the money shot, but skip the clever repetition. tell it as a more narrative tale. note: i think this really works, but i want it to be more personal. i want the last line's wallop to really sting when i get to it.
nice setting for a poem. though you use "i", i didn't feel like i was eavesdropping someone else's moment. i found myself becoming the 'i'. its a trick to accomplish and congrats. i wanted you to be more picturesque - i wanted to see more of the scene. at the same time, you use 'gently' 2x in the first stanza. i didn't think it was necessary, but if you want to make the point have the narrator do something 'gentle' - don't tell, show. i also, after "chatting with the bag boy.." i became a tou...
Ok, your 'small turning' was not what i expected, BUT - you maintain a surprising refreshing innocence in spite of the 'shock.' have you ever seen the movie "summer of '42"? i am left with the same sort of ambient haunting. i also want to credit you with -intentionally or unintentionally interjecting a thought-provoking feminism. i usually find the gruff ani difranco or judy chicago in-your-face feminism a little off-putting (though by no means unjustified). a couple thoughts: 1. in your open...
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