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AGE: 23
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 23

I am interested in art, travel, literature, film, philosophy, music, comedy, tea, healthy snacks and strange objects.
I am simple, and don’t know enough.
I wish everyone was happy, because it’s just nicer that way!

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Rick had a friend his name was Fred, but Rick constantly noticed him admiring his head Rick didn't care, he thought Fred was super cool But Rick was unwittingly being a fool One day Fred put him in a role, and then he ate Rick whole But much to his suprise Fred became tragically sick He now wished he hadn't eaten so much of Rick Fred suffered greatly and felt desperately alone He even tried to ring Rick on the phone He rang constantly in complete worry, Untill he realised he'd put Rick into t...
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Poetry / Going Down
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Going down, face to the ground Words that ignite, face to the light Going down, face the ground Words constrict then crawl around Lights twist and cry in sound The face in the ground The words will all fray, Twinkle and decay Going down, face to the ground Eyes whisper in sound Dreams beat underground Words fizzle and decay, And the lights can’t make it ok.
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Lyrics / Stay
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I put you in my pocket, that’s where you like to smile I need you in my pocket so I can stare at you for a while. And my thoughts are in my mirror when you need to get out It’s like you’ll never hurt when you’re inside out You’re in my pocket baby, and your tears sparkle up and down And I love your beautiful smile although you have that frown So I put you in my pocket, that’s where you like to smile I need you in my pocket so I can keep you for a while.
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Poetry / Again
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In a little damp corner A lonely light is lit People crowd in, living on drink Teach themselves not to think Return to a place they have to call home Scratching pain, sleep away this pain Teach themselves not to think Again Drink away this pain Teach themselves not to think Have a laugh and a drink Teach ourselves not to think Dream away this pain Drink away this pain Drink away this pain, Sleep away this pain Have another drink Teach ourselves not to think
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Poetry / Crushed aRt
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There’s poetry in the high street, it hangs like a soft blanket in the air The words cling onto the lamp posts but I don’t think you seem to care There’s music at the seaside, waves form bubbles on the sand We watch. Watch the music being playful as you gently hold my hand There’s beauty at the bus stop, it creates sparks of golden lace As I watch the shiny formations a tear forms on your face. There’s poetry in the high street, it hangs like a soft blanket in the air, And lights twinkle in t...
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Poetry / Fool
i think the last line 'faith kills me and buries me next to you' is interesting. It shows that the idea of having faith is tainted, but acknowledges that the person that it was projected towards was in some way. I like the way these two notions have been separated.
Poetry / Enchanted Pleas
This poem is talking about being captivated but at the same time seems to want to captivate the reader. The use of the line "we boldly unfold bind me with silken, threads of gold on red satin sheets" really produces this effect upon the reader. In this way, the lines "each plea a kiss, each kiss a plea " works this doubling effect. I thought this part was a cool line, and overall expressed well.
Poetry / Forgive Myself
I like this poem, especially the lines - "A single image repeats again and burns it’s pattern on my brain". I like the idea of an tortured experience playing over, and having the ability to play over and imprint on the mind. It really drums home the experience of pain through the stamping out or branding onto the self. Even though feeling and thoughts are abstract you can still be scarred in the same way as if the body was brutalised. So much so that it becomes a part of you because it cannot...
I like the way that this poem is structured, the reader really gets a sense of claustrophia from the feelings that are discussed. It becomes suffocating because of not being heard, or even 'screaming' and this still not producing any effect or achieving anything. maybe more use of imagery and exploration with language to delve further into the subject matter.
Poetry / I Want It All
I don't really completely understand this poem, but it's interesting how you juxtapose your feelings to the descriptions of nature, it makes a great way of drumming your last to sentences home to the reader. It also stands in contrast to the sweeping natural imagery that flows and creates a feeling of calmness, the 'fuck you' really makes you feel the attitude and mood of the poem, great stuff.
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