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AGE: 50
LOC: Rolla, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 11
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Poetry / The Gift Is You
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never forget..."The Gift Is You"
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Poetry / Pitch Black
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11 Reviews   15 Comments
Pitch Black Hang on to life Hang on to hope Hang on to me Give up on me give up on hope Give up on love give up on life! Then give up light, then you have only Pitch Black Trade it all for loneliness and trade it all for security Your heart is pitch black your love is pitch black Your soul is pitch black, your honesty is pitch black too Without emotion without passion without inspiration Your future is Pitch Black. You always want what you can have and you always get what you want Lies are th...
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Romance / "Jaded Stranger"
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8 Reviews   8 Comments
Lying here looking into the stillness of nothing I see the shadows of you. Lurking here in the darkness and the shadows… I can feel her presence, an apparition, a silhouette of someone I no longer understand! I sense only bitterness, anger, frustration and turmoil from this stranger,this jaded stranger, this distant person that I once knew. Here in the darkness that occupies my mind, there is no hope… no light can shine through, only constant pain and constant turmoil are present here! The p...
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Believer In Dreams Listen to me and you will see Listen to me Listen to me Believe in me, Believer in dreams See the stars and believe in me Hear your dreams, they are your reality. The future is mine.., the time is yours Fly with me…, Dream with me…, Cry with me…, Love with me…, But listen only to me, for you see…, I am your destiny. Kiss me, kiss only me I am your reality. Kiss me and you will see…. Believer in dreams Michael Wayne © 2005 The Gift Is You
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Without The Night Imagine the stars without the night…, the heavens without the moon. An empty sky, a sky without clouds. The Sun without warmth. Crying without tears. Laughter without smiles. Imagine a heart without emotion…, without passion, without Love. Me without you. Through all the tears, I see only you…, I feel only you…, I hurt – only for you. I am in love with only you. Imagine dreams without you…, Imagine the nights without you. Michael Wayne © 2005 The Gift Is You
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Poetry / Inside Myself
I am not a professional critic... and it is very hard to encourage changes when the author has poored her heart into written words. Hope your experiences are better now. Thanks very much for sharing. Michael
Poetry / Letter For You
Almost felt you had written this for and about me, but how could it be about me - when you don't know me? Well done, I enjoyed reading this a lot! Thanks very much for sharing. Michael
Poetry / Night Music
very well written. I enjoyed every word. Thanks very much for sharing.
Short Story / The Light chasers
Foremost I am not a professional critic nor am I an accomplished writer. There were times when I became consumed and absorbed into this story as if I were a silent witness to each event and there were times I wasn't there at all... I feel you should introduce your characters at an earlier stage in their friendship and establish each characters relationship to the other. If you can fill in the blanks and create more history between you characters, in my opinion you'll have a winner! I like wha...
Poetry / Committed
Very creative, unique and very original. I like it, and I smiled. Thanks for sharing, Mike
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