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AGE:
37
LOC: Marshall, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 24
LOC: Marshall, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 24
I started writing when I was 14. Over the years I compiled a book of poetry which has now disappeared. I stopped writing for a couple of years and as my life has changed, it has inspired me to start writing again. I write mostly poetry and I have a blog on myspace.
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Is it just me or is Christmas getting more expensive every year? That and the kids are getting pretty greedy. Do we even remember why we celebrate Christmas? When I was a kid, I collected stickers and Cabbage Patch Kids. Simple things gave me pleasure. I loved riding my bike or just hanging out with the neighborhood kids. I barely watched TV, and if I did it was on the 13 inch black and white one that we had. Now days, all kids want are electronics. My kids have their own TV's and DVD players...
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I want to hold your desires and feelings I want you to want no one but me I don't care if it means you can have no one else I would much rather that how it be I don't want you forever, I just want you right now Don't ask for commitment from me I can't share the same feelings that you feel inside I'm really quite selfish, you see I just want you for sometimes, as I feel the need As for your love, I want it all I don't want you to stay here, I need you to go But be here the next time I call I c...
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I really hate people who are fake. People who laugh at everything you say even if they don't find it funny just because they want to be "in" with you. They have to be who they think you want them to be in order for you to like them. What kind of friendship is that? People who are two-faced and want to be your friend until you turn your back and then they talk about you to their "real" friends. That really pisses me off. Get a life already! People who are constantly showing off what they have ...
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Who the hell thought up fairy tales and Prince Charming and happy endings? I want to sue............. It's false advertising for those of us who believe that the man of our dreams exists and that there is such a thing as happily ever after. It's a sham.............. Women have grown up on fairy tales and have some idea of what they want to find in a man based on these stories. The problem is, we're not going to find him.....He doesn't exist. But wait.........now that I think about it, I'm not...
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I try not to take my kids out in public very often. Tonight was a good example of why.......... There's Tori 14, Tyler 12, and Destiny 7. We stopped at IGA to pick up the stuff to make Nachos. Tori and I get out of the Jeep and start walking away when I notice I am missing two kids. I open the door and ask if they are coming in. Tyler: God! Destiny: HMPH! (Throws the seatbelt and gets out) Destiny: I don't want anything! Me: We're just getting dinner then we'll go home. Destiny: I don't want ...
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I agree with this. We need change in order to grow in any aspect. Great quote!
This was very well written! In giving your opinion you were honest but without being rude or hateful. Quoting from the bible was good for helping you make your point also. I enjoyed reading this!
This is an excellent start! I like the way that the narrator is so openly expressive giving the reader the true sense of how he's feeling and viewing his surroundings. Everything is well described so the reader can put themselves in the story (a thing that strongly determines if you'll keep the reader's attention.) A spell check would help as some words are misspelled (I don't mean the slang)but overall, I think it's a wonderful start.
Great! More people should feel that way! So many people just change to be someone they're not and they never think about what it will do to them in the long run or how it will affect the way they are.
"The masterful brushes strokes" - should this be "brushes stroke"? I really like the way this flows and the way the words diminish down to one at the end of each verse. I think this is very good work!
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