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AGE: 54
LOC: Bradenton, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 29

I enjoy writing verse and putting it to music.

I also enjoy writing prose, poetry, essays, and short stories.

Some of my favorite authors are Eliot, Ginsberg, Faulkner, and Joyce.

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Poetry / Rivers
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Rivers From the back alley babbling brooks to tulmultuous tributaries of humanity cascading through concrete gorges and finally spilling into a frenzied asphalt rivers, Stockton doesn't meander. There are no oxbows or lazy switchbacks, no quiet backwaters or cool, clear pools, rather raging swift and straight, colliding perpendicular with rivers equally intent. Heads bob, rapids roar in tongues; arms flail and struggle to break the surface. What lurks there in the shadows of these polluted de...
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Poetry / Deeper
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I brush my fingertips along the marble pillars That line the way to my Grail. It is good to be here, at the "Beginning", But, I want to go deeper. A serpent breaks the surface of the pool From where I stop to wet my parched lips. It dives back into the abyss And I want to follow. Fingers push across the waistland But one hand reaches to pluck ripe raspberry fruit. Red juice lava flows down an ivory hillside; Burning hot earth gravy. Then, sliding down the slippery slope, I crash into the undu...
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Poetry / Deeper
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I brush my fingertips along the marble pillars That line the way to the narrow chasm. It is good to be in the high places But, I want to go deeper. A serpent breaks the surface of the pool From where I stop to wet my parched lips. It dives back into the abyss And I want to follow. Fingers push across the waistland And one hand reaches to pluck ripe raspberry fruit. Red juice lava flows down an ivory hillside; Burning hot earth gravy. Then, sliding down the slippery slope, I crash into the und...
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Short Story / Thus Spoke a Nobody
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Poetry / Where am I???
You are a brave soul. I get trashed and melancholy, then write to purge my guilt or what-not, but am never brave enough to hang it out there for everyone to see. I don't know whether to thank you for taking me along or... well, I'm sure you catch my drift. As a poem, the rhythmic timber of the piece helps move it along. It has great clarity, which is impressive considering your condition when it was penned. I'd say, keep writing, but try it sober.
Poetry / Letting go
You know, its easy just to go down a list of ratings and pick a number and just use the same number for each category, but that's not what I did. I really liked this piece. If I had one criticism it would be that you work on the flow of the piece. But, that's just a minor thing. Nice piece. Regards,
I would love to see you find a way to put this into verse format. It resembles a list now but maybe that's what you want from it. If you are writing a poem, try to organize your ideas into verse with related items grouped together. For example: I am from Thompson, Ohio and Orlando, Florida And both serve mashed potatoes with gravy And my mother's tuna noodle casserole. I'm from Grandma Pat, Uncle Joe, and Aunt Toni And spending weekends with Grandma And that damned stick in my eye. Do you see...
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