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AGE: 35
LOC: Arlington, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 14

My favorite distractions are words.  A real love affair with collections and gatherings of letters and characters on a page, in a conversation, and in the air.  Every word has a spice and luster.  I love their cadence and rhythm and staccato.  I love how they flow and roll off the tongue, dripping with emotion and sensuality.  They shape your lips and contort your face.   A word can be soft and dreamy, floating in a whisper or hard and harsh and grating, like a pounding roar.  They fill a moment and define it, then linger in the remaining silence after the moment is gone.  Heavy and light, they evoke and inspire.  Deliberate and poignant or careless and accidental, they are the phantom thoughts and expressions that reside in a mind wanti…

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Poetry / Roach : Vacation
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Hush. Don't say another word for it may very well be Your last. My mind has started to wander and its journey is tormentously Evil in design. One small utterance from your lips Even an inaudible whimper of the Fear you should be feeling might Grate the last shred of decent Sanity left in this worn and battered Soul. "Burned Out" doesn't even begin to deservedly paint the Hell dancing behind these eyes. So Hush. For your safety and mine, I Beg of you please. Spare me from the Ridiculous, Absur...
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Poetry / Roach : Vacation
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Hush. Don't say another word for it may very well be Your last. My mind has started to wander and its journey is tormentously Evil in design. One small utterance from your lips Even an inaudible whimper of the Fear you should be feeling might Grate the last shred of decent Sanity left in this worn and battered Soul. "Burned Out" doesn't even begin to deservedly paint the Hell dancing behind these eyes. So Hush. For your safety and mine, I Beg of you please. Spare me from the Ridiculous, Absur...
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I woke up kissing you. Remnants of a dream still clinging to my lips, lickable and salty. A touch from phantom hands still lingering on my... Hmmm My fingertips still vibrating from the sensational feel of heated, shimmering skin... I am drowning in the fantasy... Lips parted... Breath coming in slow, heavy whispers. I stretch to release the energy, To expose bare shoulders from under confinement of blankets. The temperature has risen inside me to a feverish climb and I crave a cool breeze to...
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Windows open to summer For the air whispers a warm breeze Carrying the honeyed smell of the season. Due to the eventful curriculum insects rise in concert As the moon conducts and arranges the dancing stars. One could feel small and insignificant amongst this bombardment of the senses But as I lay here in the soft, cool grass I am fortunate to be its Awe-struck audience. Never again will the peace Tickle the same smile on my lips. If I concentrate hard enough I swear I can feel the earth move...
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The moonlight hit the wall In a slash of brilliance Blinking several times to clear The dense fog in my eyes, My surroundings come into focus. The transpositional shadows quavered in sync with the trees outside the rattling window as they shuddered against the fierce, screaming wind. I watched, Mesmerized by these dark phantoms as they traipsed across my room Only to die in the hypocrisy of the light The apparitions mirrored fancied thoughts Trapped in the prison of darkness. Forced to a fran...
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Amusing as it is thought provoking, this piece seems to echo the ages. It starts a universal conversation and invites debate after debate. If your intention was to get the chips falling, then you have made a mark here. Well done.
Poetry / University
It's a strong start. You don't mention any ice or cold, but I felt a chill none the less. I look forward to the finished product.
Your imagery is fantastic and lulls one into this painting as if I were a fly on the wall. Rhythm and flow inspire a laziness that can only come from a Sunday morning. Keep up the good work.
Quotes / Said to a Lover
Etheral and if whispered on the right ear, would melt knees and warm the skin in a flush. Well done.
The stanza with the tumbling blocks is visually compelling and connects the audience well with his frustration and confusion. Using more visual and physically descriptive nay convey your message with stronger determination, but overall, well done.
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