whiteGreen's profile
AGE:
20
LOC: Lawrenceville, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 11
LOC: Lawrenceville, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 11
Your reading this because,
you think you just might care about knowing a little bit about me.
If not?
then, go read something else.
as long as your reading thats good.
My favourite color is white
My last name is Green.
I write alot of poetry
and i read alot of poetry
.
Sometimes i read or write shorts
or some other kind of fiction prose.
but mostly just poetry.
I admire the beats
especcially Charles Bukowski
Allen Ginsberg
and sometimes
Jack K.
I’m into writing words not rules.
so when reading my poetry dont be alarmed if i dont ryhme.
or if i get off beat.
i think the point of poetry is to get the point across in an artistic manner not necesarly to sound good or relaxing or cheerful.
Poetry cant really be d…
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Hang up the pictures! but how, without a wall? Do you not build your music, out of the blocks of silence. How old has your skin become that it has out-aged your mind. So now that you earned authority is counted only as ignorance. You speak as deaf ears listen and broken hands throw notes, letters,grades, homework, away... Miss miss! Mister miss! the next time that you decide to teach on poetry write the words and not the rules. Miss miss! Mister miss! the next time that you decide to teach on...
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Sweet smelling aromas you're artificial You believed every word he said About those tubes being healthy. There's no toilet bowl cleaner in these You would always say that They taste better too Because you cant make a nuclear bomb out of em' Well they look the same bud, They got the same filter The crap on the inside still looks the same too. same old crap. Are they addictive? No, not if you don't smoke too many Well, you've smoked four in the past five hours. So who told you that, these littl...
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The midless purchases and receipts! The thoughts we thought we thought up on our own! The brothers are BOTH lepers! This Jesse, is a job well done. and i had to take a long deep breath and relaxing sigh after reading this. My emotinon had jumped.
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You did so good reciting this that one night. I never really liked it all that much beforehand to be completely honest with you. But when i heard you speak it that night, the words were elegant and beutiful and i really felt the poem. One of my favourites now.
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Jesse, you did good here bro. The last line wa really catching and its like finishing a good book, that it was so good you have to read it again and pretend that youve never read it before. I also heard your recording of this, that was even better! Love you bro.
This writing paints a really beautiful picture in my mind. I found it very soothing and haunting in a way. Good stuff.
Good job with this one. I will say though that i got a little thrown out of the flow of things when i read "You left. Now I am left, alone, with just my keyboard and my imagination." Its got good meaning but i felt like the words stumbled over each other a little bit. Kind of like traffic, your still moving but not as well. Then you pulled it back together and it ended on a good note.
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