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LOC: Schnecksville, PA
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Fear. Hate. Brutality. Loathing. Disgust. These emotions are synonymous with one man in particular’s name. That man is Charles Manson. However, another emotion arises along with those mentioned, an emotion that does not quite fit with the rest of the group. The emotion is excitement. One cannot deny, that at the mention of this man’s great evil, a sense of curiosity sparks within them. We thirst for more. More of his life story. More interviews with family members. More bloody details of the ...
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The many conflicts and compromises in Che Guevara’s near-epic life, including his involvement in Fidel Castro’s seizing of the Cuban Government in 1959, to his execution by CIA trained soldiers in October of 1967, made him a very prominent, and perhaps even legendary historical figure. Che Guevara was no doubt a revolutionary figure. Even if one is among those of the opinion he was evil, one cannot deny the passion and determination with which he carried out his revolutionary works. He came i...
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Look what you’ve done. You had such a horrible life. But you didn’t let that stop you, You did great things Made great things Then you ruined it. Not just for you, for us all Drugs, alcohol, you were in a downward spiral In and out of rehab The good things stopped The music stopped The bad things came The drugs came You could have been a great idol. Apparently teens followed you anyway. Doing heroine, committing suicide. So much for teen spirit.
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The dark brick walls of the alley see it all. They reach skyward to hide gang fights, They push inward to muffle a stray dog’s call, And sometimes comfort the homeless, on cold, blustery nights. The alley was lonely tonight, however, And it called in two innocent men. First the gunman. A poor man, but very clever. And then the victim, whose time to go (or so the alley judged) was then. So the alley pulled them from their homes, And drew them into its darkened core. Neither man wanted the othe...
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So you sit, trying to decide if you should end it. sometimes you are sure, then your mind changes, but it's an unbearable pain. Is it worth it? We all want to know. the angel on your shoulder says things will look up. Your gut screams heartache. For you, for her, for them. But suddenly, in a rush of emotions, you don’t care about the consequences and you end it. You are happy about your decisiveness. Five minutes later You are crying.
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It has a deceptive title, but it is a good poem nonetheless. You used metaphors rather effectively throughout, and it made for an entertaining read. I especially enjoyed the final line " Most times, after all she`s Siamese."
Interesting. I would be able to better judge the lyrics if knew the genre that your band generally plays. For example, I do not think that these lyrics would suit a death metal band too well, but perhaps they would sound nice sung by a pop - type group.
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