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LOC: Reseda, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 17
LOC: Reseda, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 17
Mid twenties, from the Midwest, and in the middle of my way to world domination, anyone wanna tag along? I dig music, all music, not just some, all musical genres even country, jazz, and golden oldies.I like having friends around me and love to party with as many of them as possible. Other than that I play guitar a little bit and write alot. What about you?
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Today I stare into the sunset Over Lake Michigan, I think about today And the world we live in. I think about people We meet everyday, About people we treat In different ways. We walk the same way down Different avenues, The air I breath’s the Same air you do too! In a world of vanity, I see no love for humanity If the sun had never shun What would we have to judge upon? How long will it take to see That any torn flesh will bleed? Peace cannot be reached With all this prejudice When did we fa...
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Why must everyday of my life Be a trial that I have to survive Why all these tests When can I rest, I ask the lord each and every night To watch over me with his guiding light But sometimes it seems Like he misplaces me, The end of this maze seems so far away I still haven’t caught up to yesterday Oh lord please I’m down on my knees, Don’t know when I can get back again And it seems like it’s been forever since I’ve been forgiven For these sins. It’s when the good guys loose And the bad guys ...
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A Word From The Artist To all the unmad; Those of minds unlike ours, With hands whose Finger tips speak As well as blind men see, Whose ears hear only The ticking of your clock And read not The quarters of your watch. It is the Mad, the Poets, The Artists, the Composers, Who create, Every color your eyes have ever heard Your ears have ever felt Your hands have ever seen. Tis we that bring those musical memories and unforgettable phrases And freeze them in time, Drawn left handed, Made in the ...
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It’s all for show And everybody knows It’s why everybody goes It’s Hol-ly-wood Stacey came here chasing a dream Of making it big on the silver screen She got a job, a waitress at Mel’s Where she found the guy to help her out He said he could make it true As long as she knew what to do. Later that night in the back of his car He told her he would make her a star Getting paid for giving head Wasn’t what she thought but then again… It’s all for show And everybody knows It’s why everybody goes It...
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LINEAR LOVE SONG IN A MAJOR What does it mean when you smile at me? What is the look I your eye? Your arms around me we walk on top of the sea And with the stars in the night. I get restless when your next to me I don’t know what I should do, If you would please take my hand with me I know that I could show you, If you were my princess I would throw you a Ball Or maybe a Masquerade, Show the world through my shuttle of love Take you into outer space, I will not say I have the power to take Al...
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GREAT. This is great! Your rhyme scheme is off the hook. I like how you rhyme the last word for about four lines then place the ryhme in the middle of the fifth line and start a new rhyme at the end. The only thing I have a hard time with is the transition from the first half to the second half. The transistion begins with "That our lover turns to another..." Try this; Though no lengend'ry heroes of lore, The same thoughts when our lover turns to another we think them a whore. After that line...
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I like this peice. It is short and says what needs to be said. I would rearange the second stanza. Instead of "Stuck in a rut, without which he can't cope, Like taking an addict away from his dope..." Try this: Stuck in a rut, without which he can't cope, an addict that can't survive away from his dope. Instead of comparing the person to an addict. Make the person an addict. He is a creature of habit correct? This will also lead better in to the next stanza about self medication.
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You forgot to post the body of you work.
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This is bad ass! I too am a victim of a father that left. It is great that through all the pain a child still yearns for the love of the father. Love to help cansole and complete the child, Love of the child to not see the mother hurting. I have been there my friend and this is badass! Iwould like to see more. Make sure to click me as one of your friends.
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