This poem is about how some beauties cannot be left in their place without someone plucking them and using them for their own pleasures. Excellent descriptions of the scent, the perfect form, how it attracts the bees to it and the woman`s hand. Very good, thank you.

This lady is the epitome of the homeless in this country. She doesn`t want to be beholding to anyone. "Abandoned Survivor" is someone who is an individual, brava. The description of this woman is heroic in a way. An out-of-luck survivor of many years. This reader thank you for making her more aware of the homeless in her region.

What a beautiful love poem. You must love this person desperately to be so passionate about him/her. `History prevails in such told myths and love tales, what a power this person has in loving you. The descriptions that you give on how much you care about this person is right here. Wonderful, thank you for reaffirming that love is here.

My condolences, you loved this person very much. You have such passion in your mourning for him. The descriptions of how many ways things remind you of him. The power of your poem is great. Thank you.

This is definately a different way of looking at reality. Werewolves and humans working together to find out who murdered someone. One thing I`m not clear about, is Katherine a clarvoyant? That dream came too close to the actual crime. You had my attention from the first sentence. Excellent how you had the pack running with the alpha wolf. The descriptions of the Dire wolves past and how the Mythians were restricted to one area in WWll is awesome. Very good, you had me wondering what is going...

This poem brings spring and the other seasons into clearer view. What vibrant colors you portray in this sonnet. Excellent description of what the seasons mean to you. Thank you for letting me view the multitude of pictures the seasons are to you.

The tone and passion of this poem is wonderful. 'Delicate balance of light and dark' what power this brings to my mind. The description you have for this person`s loving presence is awesome. Thank you.

This poetry is from a Father waiting to see his little one and become a Daddy. "Letter To My Unborn" is a wonderful way of telling that bundle of joy he/she is welcome in this world. The description you give of the love for this child`s mom and how much you will care for this baby is great. This shows a depth of feeling that is quite powerful. Thank you.

This is a excellent poem. It tells of what all of us feel at one time or another, we want the world to stop so that we can enjoy what is happening now. Never to get older or closer to death. The descriptions you give of how the world looks from your space in it, are awesome. I wish more took the time to see this place quietly without needing to bustle through. Thank you.

This short story is great. It talks of a struggling young musician whose `voice` is his music because of his shyness. The way you interweave Michael`s background with his feelings is excellent. The description of how he first decides that the guitar is his instrument is very good. Thank you for showing me how a young person`s dream can come true.