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LOC: Amenia, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 15
LOC: Amenia, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 15
Hey I’m Stacie, I’m 18 and live in NY, not the city. I’ve been writing stories since I was able to comprehend sentences. I wrote my first “books” when I was in 3rd grade and read them to the kindergarteners’. However Dragon Eyes, Unicorn Tears is my first actual novel.
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The marketplace began to fill rapidly due to the news of Drakku Onnious's return to the planet Hilgron, and there was much to say about that. Mr. Onnious was the leader of the Intergalactic Flyers, a section of the winged tribe whos life was to be devoted to protecting and perhaps saving our galaxy. However, I knew him for the man that my father had dispised dearly, and warned me of him before he was exiled. My mother's death hung heavily on him, and he began to go crazy, started accusing Mr...
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The marketplace began to fill rapidly due to the news of Drakku Onnious's return to the planet Hilgron, and there was much to say about that. Mr. Onnious was the leader of the Intergalactic Flyers, a section of the winged tribe whos life was to be devoted to protecting and perhaps saving our galaxy. However, I knew him for the man that my father had dispised dearly, and warned me of him before he was exiled. My mother's death hung heavily on him, and he began to go crazy, started accusing Mr...
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I don't really understand what is happening o where you're going wiht this that well. However I do have to say that it sounds interesting. Make sure that you use a tiny bit more deatil in some areas if you think that it can use it.
That was really good. I like the whole concept of the killing and the pain behind it. I'm not so sure I liek the line abotu writing the poem, becuase people know that you are doing it, even if it someone else saying it (that's what I was taught in english class so sorry if I'm wrong. But all in all I really liked it. Good job and keep up the good work. Best of wishes towards your goals (whatever they may be)
I thought that the plot was prety good. Grammar and spelling seem awesome. I'm not one hundred percent sure where this is going, but i guess tat's what makes it interesting. Well Good Luck!
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