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AGE:
20
LOC: Sutter, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
LOC: Sutter, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
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Lock the heart in the mouth and swallow the key I need to walk away bruised And twisted pleasure is a game Love is disposable Beat the shit out of me Wipe the smile off my face Fill my eyes with some tears Put me in my place I'm not happy until I'm screaming Now we got love high on life you're ecstasy Love is hidden somewhere under sheets Where the blindfolded cannot see And the handcuffed cannot reach The ones in pain scream and beg for more I need my entertainment and you are my prope...
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I want to stop when my eye catches you Why is this the one thing I cannot do The emotion flies I lay at home freezing in my bed sheets I'll kneel in my heart begging on my knees After all my tries (chorus) my heart doesnt want to say goodbye I search and find your eye's rejection I just wish I was the reflection I look out to the black collapsing sky while it's warmer out there than inside will you ever be mine or out of my mind I count another day another fail another heartbreak and another ...
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Okay, I think it's important that the reviewers of this site have common sense. This who rating system is not that complicated, 1-10, where do people go wrong in rating things? Not sure what I'm talking about? I'm hoping I'm not the only one who's experienced this twisted form of playing with my enjoyment in spending credits. Well, I look at my items that have new revies. Yay! New review! Hm, they lowered the rating, oh well, they must have some good criticism! I mean, they lowered my piece f...
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You're a prep that plays D&D and you're a cool guy wanna be Lie lie lie your way to the top You're doing so well bragging amongst outcasts Bitch please The things you've "done" with these girls no Feed off your lies embedded in lactose Fool yourself in illusion and relax You've got your stories to make-up and sieze and live out your fate encrypted in grease Make up how you cheat the GF oh noes oh em jee that's enough Pick on the emos so much fun Brag brag your way to the middle You know you a...
Version 2
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I get snappy and destroy no one thaws it but i burn it burn the fuel of fantasy life won't go on 'til i forget chorus: Anything (Anything) to give anger an excuse Anything (Anything) to light this ice of a fuse I'd rather (I'd rather) burn off every little part it's better (it's better) than your frost bites on my heart cut the cord of love's support pull the plug before it's too late sometimes i wish that i could as she holds his hand and walks away chorus: Anything to give anger an excuse A...
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Hm, the rhyming didn't add anything for me, that cliche rhyme sort of bugged me. But it speaks the truth how using cheap little tricks only gets you so far.8/10
Hm, hard to work with the length, but for a short piece I have to admire the swap the of hate/love goodheart/bad-ideas and taking-to/dying-for, but all the reader has to base this off of is perfume. I can't really understand anything beyond this surface you've given readers. I guess we both know nothing about the person. Im curious how with that ending it warms hearts(the goals ranking)? Just wondering.
=/ Maybe he should've done it out of pressure from someone who says he's crappy at everything, then his shot's so bad he shoots the person instead of himself. I don't know, very dry, I wish I had better advice.
haha, I think just for giggles I would've had "Memoirs: Ummmmmm." Funnier out of the six word challenges I've seen. Well done.
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