I enjoyed reading your piece overall. But to me this sounds/reads more like a rap or freestyle would. Something you'd hear Eminem bust out. I am not professional. But I liked your piece. Put a nice beat with it!

I enjoyed reading your piece. Seems its about two people that are wanting to get married, but the relationship may be questioned by some!? I wasn't entirely sure. Guess my mind had a "readers" block at this very moment and I wasn't able to capture where you were going with this piece! Overall its nice. Not an entirely long poem, that you tend to get lost in. Thanks

I am definitly not one to judge. You're right though about the "limerick' Its not one, but oh well. It does entertain. It's fun to read, guess because it rhymes....Although I had to read it a couple times to really understand it. I am a bit slow possibly! Well good piece overall!

I love pieces like these. I can relate, a couple of my pieces sounds somewhat like this, or relate to the same situation. I loved it, it was good to read, was easy to understand the first time being read. Good work overall!

I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was great, its broken down nicely and each section to it may start the same, but is able to linger into something new. I had fun reading it, and it was easy to understand the first skim through. GOod work overall.

Nice writing. I was able to follow this piece better than a previously reviewed piece. I enjoyed reading it. It wasn't boring, it kept right along truckin'. Some writings I tend to get stuck at a sentence or word, but that wasn't the case here! Good work overall! thx

very well written...i enjoyed it!

Overall I liked the poem...there are four lines you need to address for spelling....: [I'll tell you from experience] from was wrong in this line. [I guarantee that you have won] guarantee was wrong in this line. [Delia’s is way cooler] Delia's needed punctuation. [Who ever said that they didn't drink?] don't sounds better as didn't But I liked your poem over all!

Overall nice poem, it reads slow but thats okay Only place I saw that could use a new word was the duplicate word "freak" used side by side...could possibly use a different word there.!? Called a freak, A freak, a geek, Overall good work!