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AGE: 16
LOC: Houston, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 28

Well I’m a writer simple as that and I enjoy writing stories and poems because they pop into my head uninvited to get them out I have to write them down so I don’t get a head ache,another thing is the way I write my poetry is alot different from others the poems I write are my thoughts and staements although people tell me they are quite philosophical for some reason. I would also like to be a journalist that writes what people are afraid to write such as undercover kinda work and such nots, last but not least you’ll barely see me online I only go on occasionally.So see you guys soon.Don’t be afraid to give me an honest review cause I’m young I promise you guys well not scar me , I just want to learn the trade and get published.you can a…

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Poetry / Light brings shadows
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Memories of hate are more rememberant Than memories of love Although they are like the sun and moon. They both were once Held in a eternal embrace Yet it was out of love That  they despised each other For hate and hate Were once tied by love --- Yet the strands of passion That once bounded them Was broken to create an eclipse.
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Poetry / Light brings shadows
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Memories of hate are more rememberant Than memories of love Although they are like the sun and moon. They both were once Held in a eternal embrace Yet it was out of love Thet despised each other For hate and hate Were once tied by love --- Yet the strands of passion That once bounded them Was broken to create an eclipse.
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Poetry / lover's fire
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Before lovers split Their flames were like wild fires --  Yet there may come a day When those very flames That ingited your heart May become dying embers.
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Poetry / Decetitful china
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My heart of glass Was shattered to flakes of shards, But if it were To be mended It would surly be a new heart. But would this crystal heart Ever really know The secrets of the first or Would this fragile china I now possess Be broken , once again.
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Poetry / Oasis
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Theres nothing wrong With what I want but The thing is; If I were to  profess my love Then society will condemm us both. Yet I do spy A glimmer of hope That you and I will be, Unfortuantely our love Will have to begin in society's shadow But it will suffice Inevitability our reationship Will be uncovered And society will not be merciful. For society lives by day As our love Thrives under celestial eyes.
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Haiku/Senryu / May
by Paul_Archer
You need to focus on where you want this piece of poem to go. the first and 2nd line is great but the last one threw me off, kinda...
Quotes / 9 word quote
by cooljim102055
I really like how 'i know, you know...' '...nothing about everthing.' which is good because we think we know things but theres something new under the sun every day.
Humor/Satire / The Secret Sex Life of Osama bin Laden
by barrettzrun
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Poetry / Love Reject
by DimePrincess
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Quotes / Five
by kelmo
I like your sense of ideal and I feel that you could've added more to this quote/poem.
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