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AGE: 14
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 04

Other then Urbis, I’m also an active photographer and drawer.
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A silent world That's a hopeful dream A quiet grove Nothing many know The behaived children More like screeching kin Food of so delicious For the few who live Storms of pouring money Others crawling by like dirt poor worms The grateful blue sky Seems gray with the smog of pollution A simple stroll The run for your life Families gathering in joy Others killing as if koi Another happiness brought about Is suffering and very much doubt Education a simple pain to kids While the unfortunate crave ...
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Before the sun even rises to greet the day, The vast natural life comes to breath. Although it may seem brought down for there is no light, but senses other then sight may find it all out. Step outside to where cold, freshly water painted grass engulfs your feet in the many morning dew. Your ears behold such a peaceful sound to awaken your head as the birds perform but a rhapsody of songs. The skin you wear will creep with cool morning's chill, but it is merely the feeling of her newly breath...
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Aw, it definantly touches ones heart when you truely think of the words. Good job in protraying such a sad thought to more of a realistic visual of art
Poetry / REST
It's alittle strangely worded and with the rhyming on and off, it just doesn't help with any flow. Other then that, I'm not sure how to explain it any further but it needs to be more organized
Poetry / December 24th
It wasn't too bad, just alittle confusing about the appendixes and livers unless they eat themselves a good feast XD. Nicely written describing some holiday spirit.
This was sort of confusing. Not any real concept except the boredum of some person with gives it a better meaning I suppose. Just elaborate alittle bit more
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