hmm interesting i think wat it means is that the words i love you are sometimes said without meaning as in we all say them but sometimes we never mean it if thats wat its saying then i get the message very clear

cool the story is good but i think u need to work on desribing the area more when i was reading i could see the river and the characters in my head but they had no faces as in i didnt know wat they looked like or wat the area around them looked like the story is good and the way u worded it is nice and i think that with a little work it will turn out well

i like it im not sure about the back ground story or wat came before all this happened but its worth completing

hmm its good but its a bit hard to follow u need to desribe wats going on in a more simple way so that everyone can understade it

hahahahaha that is funny that is something i would buy to read try and get that published

hmm i think it has to meny big words in it and that makes it hard to understand but i think ur trying to say people hurt each other to much in the world without any reason

hmm its very good but i think some to the thing this guy can do are impossable to do also the setting is a little vauge i think if u do get this book publish that u sould incould some type of map