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AGE:
19
LOC: Greeley, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 07
LOC: Greeley, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 07
i enjoy taking people out of their comfort zones.
sometimes i cry at movies.
i love photos.
some babies are just ugly.
i like driving.
i clichely want to see the world.
i absolutely HATE skiing.
i either want to be famous and never get married or move to a tiny podarn town with the absolute love of my life and have kids.
i try to write in my journal as much as possible.
i like hanging up on people…and deleting them from my myspace… lipgloss is my favorite thing.
i love to read.
sometimes when i’m stressed out…i smoke.
i think i might be a horrible mother…
i love talking to people.
i cant stand star wars.
i think long nails are unattractive.
i love kissing…probably my favorite thing to do.
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A penny for your thoughts, Princess Sweet angel Goddess of smut Flame tosser Lovely entertainer of mine I can offer you two at reason Three is lucky But four is just impractical Speak if you must But mostly just stir Stir baby You know how I like it You are overdramatic at best But remember that Nobody likes a stool pidgeon.
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You can sit here if you like But be gone, you. Because I smoked you away So you should keep walking. Catch my scent in the air Because I am responsible for the stench Because that lovey dovey smog, That fog I could not catch So I'll just lay here in the breeze This Piss Princess is smoked stoked So just let us be. But then again, What's one more. So just let it out on me, in me. I can smoke you away too Just like playing a flute What could you possibly have to tell me That I haven't heard Thi...
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She could get lost in grey hoodie eyes Any day of the week Little crinkled heart shutter flutters From being in her pocket so long But do breathe in plaid cloaks Today and yesterday Because tomorrow They will have gone Through the wash twice and a half Swallow your jack-o-lanterns whole And hand jive in the shower Or else you wont make it back by sunrise. The kisses were too soft The embraces, too quick And the strokes too free Sandwiches he made her turned to ash on her tongue And the ink he...
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He held her hand And kissed her neck Tickled her back And told her how beautiful she was. Beautiful. How cliche. OH YOUR LIPS OH YOUR TEETH OH YOUR HAIR Your eyes, your lashes, your skin. Every word out of his mouth, Was dripping with two cent Romance novel toxic waste But she ate it up in three large helpings. She was gone with the wind And high as a kite With romantical blood rushing to her head. She took the bait. Even if it was just a dress up romance. Stand in. As rental service as puppy...
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Please don’t look at me. I am feeling poetic. What else is there to do While sitting in a puddle Of Imagined Anticipated Perhaps hoped for girl tears in an empty bath tub. Inhale little girl. Because one day, It really will be the day. And that’s the only day You will ever really know What it is to Live Die And sit pretty For everyone else. But In the mean time, This is for you; Smoke Dance Prance And yearn. Run around in vicious Redundant circles Of meaningless fucks And ungranted wishes. La...
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This poem is beautiful. The imagry was amazing, i felt like i was in it. the, "Red juice lava flows down an ivory hillside" line almost doesn't seem like it fits here, but that is just my humble opinion.
It was good but a little hard to follow. I think you should maybe consider a different format. The poem it self and the "story" that it tells is good, and very relatable.
When I first looked at this piece and saw how short it was I had my doubts, but it is actually a good piece. It stands on it's own very well and expresses a lost emotion that I think most people can relate to at one point or another in their life. I don't know if I would make this poem the star of all of your works, it's strong but I can tell that you have a lot of talent and more to say. So give yourself a pat on the back for a good piece, but definatly move forward and keep writing...I thin...
I actually really enjoyed this piece. A bit on the morbid side but held true to reality and human emotion. The second to the last stanza seems a little bitter sweet to me though as far as keeping it in, it doesnt seemt to fit in the poem but it definatly brings something to the table. Just play with it a little.
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